| Reviews for Ash's Betrayal |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 6/27 But the tail is shaped like a lightning bolt and not a heart |
 NeonSparks chapter 20 . 5/17 Will there be a different title if the story is fully completed? |
| Baneful Pens chapter 15 . 5/11 Man ash is a fucking horndog |
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/8 Can you at least keep the story instead of deleting it when the new one is made if your gonna make a new one |
| Ms.itstheJokerhahaha chapter 20 . 4/7 I liked the story the way it was when are you going to continue |
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/11 What was wrong with the story that you are rebooting it |
| Primus2021 chapter 13 . 8/28/2019 Was expecting Latias to telepathically tell Ash that Tobias' Latios was a fake, like a Ditto that was trained to transform on command, same with Darkrei, then Ash would blurt out what she told him, thus revealing Tobias as a Fraud and disqualify him. |
| Primus2021 chapter 12 . 8/28/2019 I wonder if the Silver in this fic is a hybrid of both the anime and gave versions or not, also if Richie is Yellow's son, maybe that's why he has that Pikachu of his Sparky I think it was called. |
| Primus2021 chapter 10 . 8/28/2019 knew it. If she feels sick from remembering kissing her now revealed half-brother, just think if she lost her v-card to him as well, lol. Not sure how I feel about Raichu and Latias but at least they have human forms, I like Gardevior more though. |
| Primus2021 chapter 9 . 8/28/2019 I'm guessing that the lady at the end is Yellow. I might be wrong but... ... ...was I supposed to think that Red and Delia slept with Misty's mom ... Kasumi ... and that Misty is now Ash's half-sister? |
| Primus2021 chapter 3 . 8/28/2019 great chapter, was expecting a Sabrina lemon though, pity. |
| Primus2021 chapter 1 . 8/28/2019 Forgot to comment on the gifts and the Ivy lemon in Chap 2... Loved the gifts, wish it was a bit more like the Pikachu Z-Stones and a Charizite X, the Black one was my fave. As to the Ivy lemon it was good, but I wanted more. |
| Primus2021 chapter 2 . 8/28/2019 I am extremely disappointed by this chapter, why? After the way chap 1 ended, I was expecting chap 2 to be a full fledged lemon chapter, pity. That said as a follow up chapter after a lemon it was good. still wish it was a lemon chapter, and I hope since this is a harem fic that ya won't leave us hanging like that again, unless the lemons are in a side story or on another site, like AFF, AO3 etc. |
| PatriotPride93 chapter 20 . 8/18/2019 At first I was likeANOTHER ONE CANCELLED!?" but then I was likeOk, I'll take a reboot" can't wait to see what you got for the reboot |
| Razerwolf81 chapter 20 . 8/18/2019 Shame I liked it as it was |
