This is an interesting idea here. I do hope there is more to come soon.

Sounds like this is going to be fun on the bun! I can't wait until the next chapter.

Ohhh, I really like the concept you have here. It's a different and interesting twist on the usual Harry Potter/Naruto crossover and I'm really excited to see where you take it. Tsukimoto is such a great name to use and actually makes it easier than just saying the Elemental Continent or something like that, and the inclusion of the Light Stations was both well handled and realisticly portrayed. The political ramifications are very intriguing, especially considering you're not nerfing the ninjas (of which I am extremely happy about, because I completely agree that when you compare advantages and disadvantages, the shinobi would inevitably trounce the wizards).

Also, I have to wonder at what the political situation and concerns will be concerning sending the Hokage's children into another world? Like it or not, politically and societally they're important diplomatic figures no matter their age just by that status alone, nevermind the whole Hyuuga descent bit and being Uzumaki Naruto's kids 'cause that just opens another can of worms. Plus, adding Sarada to the mix as the Uchiha heiress and the daughter of the other half of the world's most powerful shinobi. Then if you decide to add Shikadai or Shinki, you have the connection to the Kazekage which adds a whole other country into the mix, but I'm not sure if that's the direction you're going and I'm probably getting ahead of myself. Sorry. I'm just really interested in how the wizards are going to deal with this. If anything happened to any of these kids it could lead to disaster, and damn I'm getting excited! Anywho, I should probably stop rambling. Your writing was well done and immersive, and I greatly look forward to your next chapter, as well as where this story goes. Have a lovely day!
~Alabaster Ink

It's really good! I have a question for you to think about. How long does it take to us it? Like if they were escaping, would they be able to get away quickly or not? This story is very interesting! Keep up the good work!

Insta-fave.
I know you want constructive criticism, but there isn't a whole lot that needs constructing. Keep it up.

Wow. I never knew I wanted a crossover like this. It's so good! Please continue!

Woot first review! Anyway loving the premise, glad you haven't nerfed the Shinobi always hated that in fic's, agree with about how a fight between the 2 groupz would go especially if you take into account the Substitution jutsu, which in theory could be used to substitute the Shinobi with an wizard potentially causing them to be hit by their own spell. I'm wondering what you have planned for if jutsu and spells collid, would the technique with more power and potency behind it would win or would they just cancel eachother out? Anyway looking forward to more chapters in future :D