aaaah this made me cry. More pls

cool chapter please do more

Aw, that is REALLY sweet! I like how instead of mostly being about the Doctor, it deals with a Sylveon who just got a MAJOR confidence drainer...and then meets the Doctor, who basically greets him by complimenting the Fairy type for how it looks. Nice! :)

This is a good story, one shot or not, and, personally, I think it would be cool to see a bond grow for the Doctor and the Sylveon Lucky.

This was a really good one-shot; I would love if you continued this.

Good writing style, and great imagery, reading it really makes you feel like you're there. I don't know if Cindy and Lucky are anime characters, but I really don't like this Cindy person. Abandoning Lucky for evolving wrong seems extreme. Been a while since this first chapter, but I hope you write more.

This is good you should continue the story i love sylveon and the 11 doctor nice work.

Nice work! This is a really neat idea. You do a great job showing Lucky as a sylveon. I particularly like the scene where the Doctor meets Lucky.

I'm pretty sure the Pokémon is spelled “eevee” though.

The scenes spent as an eevee are really excellent, although I find the scene where Cindy feels terrible about the injury hard to reconcile with her sending Lucky away because it evolved wrong or trying to catch up with Lucky to make amends.

I would love if you continued this.

This is so perfect! It's great! Please continue, quick question, can the Doctor understand pokemon with his all-speak (that's not what's it's called but whatever) ability? I think he could, but he doesn't have to to. I can't imagine him battling though, so pokemon would just be his friends (friends that I can imagine beating up our Doctor if someone tried to hurt him no matter how much he didn't want to hurt anyone) :D

this is cool. I you continue it.