| Reviews for Homeworld |
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  Trusty chapter 11 . 2/16/2018 I was reading, and I need to say , it was fabulous ! |
| Trusty chapter 5 . 2/16/2018 Neat chapter |
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/23/2017 I would like to enjoy your work, but I simply cannot at its current state. The commas after each line of dialogue for the characters breaks the immersion I felt when reading, and capitalization and proper punctuation is key in drawing in the reader into your work. Hope this helps with your writing. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/9/2017 The diamonds are so mean! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/9/2017 Yes,please continue! It doesn't matter because we all love you're story! |
 TrustNoOneYouCant chapter 11 . 6/6/2017 Aww sad. I would still like to read. |
| RainaBobuli chapter 11 . 6/5/2017 Hm ok |
| gothiccross017 chapter 11 . 6/5/2017 still love your story, you do what you want |
| TrustNoOneYouCant chapter 10 . 5/31/2017 This is amazing fic! I wish there would be more pages! |
| shadow chapter 10 . 5/21/2017 I liked the chapter! |
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/20/2017 To be honest, i think what you just wrote is going to happen in the show. Excellent work, keep it up:) |
| Kidd-Husky chapter 10 . 5/22/2017 the more I read, the more I screamed |
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/20/2017 Please continue this is awesome! |
| Peridoritotime chapter 10 . 5/21/2017 I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/19/2017 Holy shit its getting intense! Great job with the fanfic |
