Hey, can’t wait to read the next chapter. ️️

Dingo230 (yes I have a username... just website isn’t letting me sign in)

You better not kill off Stoick, even in fanfiction I can't get away from that stupid scene.

Ooh, great opening chapter!

I can’t wait for the next chapter! :):):) the angsts the Subtle things of the west that make it so real feeling!

There is something in some of the characters that is bugging me but I can’t put my finger on it.

Anyway can’t wait for the next chapter and look forward to your growth as an author:)

Just wondering how you’re going with getting the new chapter out? I am adoring this story and have read it multiple times.

Please finish this story! I love it so much!

Please update! I know it's been awhile, but could you try once more. You haven't discontinued, so I'm patient. Just this book is one of the best AU out there... sorry harrypanther. I really want to see how this ends... please?

I honestly thought Toothless would be a bandit or something :P don't know why I thought that but I did

where's the next chapter? I must READ.

You best come back here and update this! Don’t make me come find you and slap you in irons to get ya to finish it. Hehe. Also Ruff in that outfit is a hilarious thought.
Until next time,
Keep up the amazing work!

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Never have I ever wanted a wild-west fic more than this, I am seriously in love with this
Wow
Your writing style? Brilliant, the plot? Toothless aa horse who was mistreated? Hiccup? Actually being left handed? Showing that he is actually strong from working in the forge? (Far too many people put him as weak even after years of lifting and beating metal) Astride character? The twins slow change to the hiccups side? Snotlout and Stoic? God I LOVE this, honestly fantastic and I can't wait for the new chapter and to see what happens next, ik it wasn't really a cliff hanger, but also? It was because, I want to see so badly hOw Hiccup handles this, if Toothless will return and how, Astrid and Hiccups relationship development, and the twins teetering into the side of hiccup
Just wow, thank you so much for writing! I absolutely love

Slightly rushed, but not too bad
Flush it out a bit.

OMG great chap! I've been pretty sick today (all week actually pfft) but this brightened it up! Haha loved Ruffnut's disguise- ooh and I can't wait to see what's waiting for him back at Berk. And nah, the pacing's fine. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I don’t think you’re taking the “Toothless is gone” thing too quickly. Hiccup has bitterly accepted it because it makes sense that the best thing in his life would get ripped away, of course that would happen. But just because he’s accepted that Toothless is gone doesn’t mean that he’s over it.

Also, the mental imagery of Ruffnut in that dress was delightful. I’m really excited to see where this goes next.

Too short? This is awesome!

For you it might seem like you're not including enough details, but I think it's not a problem. The talking and the exposition seem balanced.