Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

You have killian's loyalty, ability to love, and fierceness pegged! I loved this story too. I loved how killian became king of Camelot! Aaahhh something I wish would have happened in the show , more or less:)
Excellent writing on their lovemaking, and really, through out the whole thing. I very much enjoyed this piece. So much so I read it all in one day. I'll be looking forward to more of your works ;)

I enjoyed this story very much

I loved every moment of this story. Thank you. Very well written and truly beautiful

This was great :) I love how you've taken the characters and kept them in line with what we know while still giving them a brand new set of stories.

Thanks for sharing!

I know you were worried about the intimacy scene, and I just wanted to say I thought you did a good job. While it wasn't necessarily important to the plot, it was poetic and a good example of your skill with words. I also want to applaud you on writing such a scene and yet not letting it feel like smut. It can be so hard to do, even with sex scenes that are necessary to the plot. You did an excellent job and I'm jealous.

You mentioned suggestions for one shots? I would like to see more about Snow and Charming within this verse. How do they feel about their daughter getting married so suddenly. Does holding her grandson make Snow wish they had had more children?
Also, you mentioned that Snow was deposed and lost her original title. Does that mean Regina is still queen? Did she give up on revenge?

What a cool premise! I've never read a story about Emma being left behind to face her conquerors. The way you wrote Emma's response to being conquered was great. Her anxiety was palpable. Yesssss Emma hitting Liam was amazing. I am so here for fiery Emma not being cowed, even though she is at a serious disadvantage.

Such a lovely tale...looking forward to the next chapter!

A very lovely tale! I enjoyed it immensely!

A great way to end the story. I loved every minute of it, glad the Dark One Rumpel got his comeuppance and Arthur's sacrifice was sad but fulfilling. I like how you implied that Guinevere may love Lancelot, which was implied in the show as well. I love your story with the poetic lines, it really flowed well.

So glad I stumbled upon this. I absolutely loved it!

Not so CaptainSwan, but I'd be curious to read how Sir Walsh ended up speaking with The Dark One. Also curious about how Snow and David would handle the waiting room while Emma Gabe birth...same with Killian for that matter.

OH. THIS. This was fantastic, and beautiful. Tis a bit bittersweet that it's ending, but that's what rereading is for, is it not. :D

This story is amazing! Thank you for writing it! You should definitely do one shots in this universe. And you should write more captain swan stories!

I enjoyed this story and I loved how your wrote Arthur. :)