hey! this is a really good book, honestly.
i'm not very good at reviews, but this book keeps the original Tower of God personalities a little too much for my taste. it flows the same, and the black march stays the same. it's still a great book, honestly, it just leans a little too close to the original Tower of God.

I am for one liking the way it is going. Also idk what is is in your version of ToG but I thought it was Shinsu(wiki says that means divine water). Just would like to know why you put spirit instead.

istg if annabeth goes the same say Rachel diD I'LL ACTUALLY KILL

Time for the Turtles to meet Rak.. I wonder what characters will be representing them, if they get replaced. Anyway, I really like this story, but I think it would be more enjoyable if it deviated a bit further from the manhwa instead of an almost exact copy.

Awesome! Are you continuing this? I mean, finishing it?

I'm just asking but Annabeth isn't going to be like 라헬(Can't spell it in English) right? I'm a fan of 'the tower of God' and I was just wondering if the story is going to be the same.
I love your writing! It's really descriptive and interesting to read. Hope you keep this on!

Boring how is it boring it's fuckung romantic

And here's another nice chapter to read. Maybe a little short, but still nice to read.
Anyway, just to know, but the plot will remain the same as Tog? Not that it's a bad thing, after all, the Tog plot is already beautiful so, but if only the characters change then you would first read the manwha directly.
However you are still, I will not stop reading it just for this, but still a very nice fiction to read, but with regard to what I said before ... try thinking about it, I think the story could just be better with some original event.
Well, what I had to say I said, so I greet you in the next chapter. We write! ;)

This is an awesome story please keep writing

Oh lol. Can't wait to see which characters you use in place of those in Tower of God...

But what kinda scares me is that this is an exact transcription. Almost word for word in part... I don't think you should copy the storyline word for word: not really fair for the author...

You can draw inspiration, but changing the characters names and making this into a fanfiction doesn't seem to be original at all.

The black March prefers the company of men, hehe

please continue the story

Guys!

There is already a character introduced that "has no eyes"

Great job!

That-That's just mean. So this little girl obviously loves the stars and apparently nobody can help her find them. So the fairies after playing with her for hours tells her to keep walking until she finds No Eyes who eats her. This was a really good chapter no complaints and that first part wasn't me yelling at you it was me yelling at the fairies.