I think this is probably the best Mahouka fic. It is interestingly engaging, the characters are well written and in character, the action and development is great, and I can't help but find it as a guilty pleasure to re read it occasionally. I can totally get how writing new chapters at this point is difficult though since the "first arc" has effectively ended. Dying to know what type of arc will come next. anyways just wanted to drop another review to let the author and anyone else reading reviews that this is an awesome fic so make sure to read and review. thanks.

Tatsuya was raised to be a killing machine . Was Indoctrinated, and made to kill animals as stepping stone's till he eventually killed a soldier at 6 years old. The family's reaction, especially the twins. Was just... lackluster? .
Fuck I dono why tatsuya and miyuki didnt already ditch the fuckers by now. Iresspective if they not the people they would have been. And not get tied to a clan again. Tatsuya's knowlage and tech from time as torus silver should be enough to eastabling himself as a prominent figure. But seems like hell just give it to this fucking clan for free just cause.

Will continue reading as this is the best in this fandom sofar.

Too many perspectives. The premise was great, but this is just dragging out. Tatsuya too open with powers and trusting, would expect someone who lived a double life as a psudeo military trump card and was feared by his future version of his aunt to have some tact.

You can create secondary characters without making them seem like mere background decorations. But at hell, they get more dialogue and scenes than Tasuya.

Just a suggestion but thier development can be done through thier interactions with him and possibly with other relevant individuals now and then if it contributes to whatever this story is.

Focus more on Tatsuya and Miyuki, adjusting to this new place in time and develop some sort of collective goal. siding with their old familial clan is just wishy washy lazy shit, I mean hell him and his sister could start a damn clan on thier own. And by pairing suggesting they be romantically involved at some point so build on that or is that just to lead readers on in hopes he hooks up with harem including his hot aunt.

If so, kill off some irrelevant clan members in a meaningful way that could galvanize and harden the rest somewhat. Coz fuck me, they sure dragging thier ass to plan a solid counter attack at an organisation that set in motion events that could have turned their clan into some Edge club.

very entertaining start. looking forward to more reactions and Tatsuya interactions with the twins and his great grandma... seems like your going to play an angle of Ayame taking Mayas place. The observation that Gen had of Miyuki being underprepared to lead the clan was very interesting. It makes me wonder if Maya had some sort of scheme to steal Miyukis body at some point... especially with how focused she was on Tatsuya and how he was programmed about Miyuki. Anyways thank you for writing, looking forward to more.

I can understand the need for vengence and to send a message that there children are off limits any one would want that specially since what Dahan did to Maya but there is no actual need for war just let Tatsuya utilize Material burst to deztroy Dahan and be done with it we have all scene what he can do with it and in this story he has destroyed a universe with it so whats a mesely country also it will set an excuse for Genzou as to why he decided to bring out Tatsuya now and not lose half of the family to do so.

Thank you for this story, I created an account just to say this.

Gotta admit since you said at some point that you were really just writing this story so that you could write a foursome I'm surprised you went this deep with it. I can definitely respect the commitment though since I normally don't really care for time travel stories since it tends to erase a lot of the points I enjoy about stories but I have to say this one has been rather enjoyable so far.

Just read it again and I can say without a doupt. I really can't wait for the update. Hahahha

I just read the ln and i was wondering would they, this yotsuba family or even genzou, realize that miyuki was made to be the wife of tetsuya and that tetsuya would have become the clan head?

I'm looking forward to the new cap. bye.

Please update this story next

Any chance to get next chapter?

This is awesome. I can't wait for another chapter release. All hail Tatsuya

Plz update more

Please update

My lord when will be new update of this Beautiful art. I am desperately waiting for update.