Omg what will happen next ?! Please continue please!

Skip ahead and do a flashback.
Very vivid imagery. Cool

Hi, l like your story. I think it will change everything that Sephiroth pass for this. Please, continue from the moment that you left because I want to know how Angela and genesis react.

I don't imagine Angeal and Genesis will let Sephiroth go crazy and go through this alone.

Well, that would depend on how you want to interpret the story. If you wanted to do like a frenzied montage of senses and images, ending with them getting him to safety, go with the first option. If you wanted to do something with the mindset of "Okay, he's safe, now what?" and dealing with the emotional aftermath of shutting out their emotions to deal with the problem from before, go with the second may not be how you intended to write it, but that is what my mind has come up with in regards to what might happen next.

Overall though, great start to the story! You should be proud; that imagery is very vivid.

Oh my god what is going to happen next!?
Please update soon

Amazing story;-)
Please uodate soon:-)

It'll be interesting to see where you are going to take this...I would have to agree with you admit the gruesome and well written details.