Reviews for The Element of Surprise |
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![]() ![]() ![]() continue, please |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this updated soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has potential, I look forward to seeing what you do with it. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting set up. Alexander saves the night. Please keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, can't wait to see where you go with it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel so bad for Charlie and Bill, they're just trying to help, and all they get is this frustrated angry pre-teen sniping at them. Hopefully they can all three of them be on more friendly terms soon! Ron is the sweetest brother though. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Super interesting start to the story. Can't wait to figure out what bits of the canon will change and what bits might stay the same with such a big change in Harry's life. I always love reading fic about Bill and Charlie because we know so little about them and they both seem like amazing guys. Can hardly wait to find out what way you are going to involve them in Harry's crazy life. Looking forward to the next chapter :D. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds like an awesome story! Cant wait to read more |