Reviews for The Element of Surprise
vrani140 chapter 4 . 1/11
continue, please
dncelza chapter 3 . 7/22/2019
please update soon...
annagardner11 chapter 4 . 2/21/2019
Love this updated soon
Fire Tempest chapter 4 . 12/10/2018
This has potential, I look forward to seeing what you do with it.
kirsty21 chapter 4 . 11/26/2018
cool
celticwitch77 chapter 4 . 11/17/2018
i like it
geekymom chapter 4 . 11/17/2018
Fantastic chapter!
jadely31 chapter 4 . 11/17/2018
Interesting set up. Alexander saves the night. Please keep writing.
doxiesmom14 chapter 3 . 5/11/2018
Great story, can't wait to see where you go with it.
Kermitty chapter 3 . 5/6/2018
I feel so bad for Charlie and Bill, they're just trying to help, and all they get is this frustrated angry pre-teen sniping at them. Hopefully they can all three of them be on more friendly terms soon! Ron is the sweetest brother though.
kirsty21 chapter 3 . 5/6/2018
cool
lilly-flower15 chapter 3 . 5/6/2018
Great chapter update soon
geekymom chapter 3 . 5/6/2018
Great story!
Kermitty chapter 2 . 9/30/2017
Super interesting start to the story. Can't wait to figure out what bits of the canon will change and what bits might stay the same with such a big change in Harry's life. I always love reading fic about Bill and Charlie because we know so little about them and they both seem like amazing guys. Can hardly wait to find out what way you are going to involve them in Harry's crazy life. Looking forward to the next chapter :D.
IrishEyesAreSmiling chapter 2 . 8/6/2017
Sounds like an awesome story! Cant wait to read more
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