great and interesting story so far! .

Great story! Love your plot and characters. I would love to read more, please continue it!

Very interesting story so far, such a pity it doesn’t seem to continue. I hope to see someone will adopt or re-create the story in the future!

I love your stories. Hate Your cliffhangers.

love it. please update soon.

Keep it up great story vary unique

I found your story but it seems to me as if it is abadoned?

The story is interesting but at the moment we can't say to much.

It is nice that Harry don't have any ill will against the Potter family. They are strangers and till they get to know each other they will be strangers.

The sceen with Petunia and Lilly... yeah this way really hypocrite since Lilly and James didn't check on Harry. Even if he won't live with them and even if they paid for his upbringing. This way they aren't much better than Petunia and Vernon. Even if they should have contacted the Potter about the lost kid. Okay then they would have kkown about the abuse...

I’m a little surprised that this is only the third HP fan fiction I’ve read where the author has a clear fetish for Japanese culture. I thought there’d be many more of them.

Regardless of my disdain for her, I were Petunia I would have smacked Lily in the head. She went off on a tirade about Petunia being horrid for not seeing her nephew for seven years, forgetting that she was the one who chose to abandon her son with relatives she knew wouldn’t treat him well and cared so little she didn’t even realise he’d left. What a hypocrite.

Not an issue, just something I found funny that you might want to fix. You said the raven had jet black HAIR. Not feathers, hair.

I know you’ve possibly abandoned this story and it’s already several more chapters in so the pairings were probably already decided, but I wanted to put my two cents in. I agree there are too many Hinny and Harmony stories. For this story, I have three very uncommon pairings. Pansy, Penelope or Katie.

All I can say is, please update

Please update this is awesome I cannot wait until the next chapter

Please continue to write this fanfiction.
Please continue to update.

A great story here so far! Looking forward to reading more!