Ummm what!? Edward is an evil witch! I did not expect that! Is it weird that I kinda want Bella to pick the evil side? Story is fantastic so far and I can't put it down!

For me, it was still a little sad but it’s either ending. They had to lose something to stay together as a couple. Otherwise she had to lose Edward to have Mason. It is what it is. Thanks for sharing this story, loved it!

New reader and reviewer to your story, Undecided. Such an interesting plot - unlike anything I’ve ever read before! I truly enjoyed it - especially during this pandemic when reading fanfic can take you to a completely different place. I am choosing to not read your alternative ending as this one is perfect for me - and quite honestly, the fight with Chelsea was a bit tense for me don’t need more angst! I wasn’t sure if this was going to be a HEA so I was glad with the way it ended.

Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us! Be well - stay safe!

This is a gem of a story. I absolutely loved it. Thank you! I would love to see a sequel, if you're ever up to it. Regardless, this was sooooiii good!

you weren't kidding this alternative had me crying from beginning to end.

love the story. thank you for sharing.

I had started to read this years and a while back I decided to wait for you to finish it. I just now got to read it from start to finish and I LOVED IT! I loved it so much I'm gonna go back and reread it now. This story was amazing and I'm so so sad that it's over. If you ever publish this I'll be one of the first in line to purchase it. I also hope you write another story in this realm. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us.

Well, I sure see that you are fluent in BITCH. Let me tell you something, ma'am, since you've been a silent follower since she started, how about you remain silent or better yet, stop following her. She doesn't need the likes of you on her stories. It is her decision whether or not she wants a beta, just like it's your decision on whether to read or keep your mouth shut or speak out where you know she can't answer you back. Crawl back under the hole in which you've been residing!

Is that plain enough English for you?

Teresa chapter 22 . 56m ago
I get that English isn't your first language (painfully obvious in several of your stories) but after 10 years of writing fanfiction (yes, I've been a silent follower since you started) I don't see that as a legitimate reason for such silly mistakes as mixing up "rouge" with "rogue" as I know you meant to write in this story.
Like, there are so many beta readers out there, so why don't you get one since you struggle with the language?

Hey Teresa... I think we need to talk, ma... come out of the shadows and play with us, yea? You are over the top and the negativity is completed unnecessary. Did you ever hear of a pm; out wait cowards who won’t give their real login can’t do that, can they precious?! I would LOVE to see what you can offer as a writer and I DOUBT it would even hold a match to ANY of this woman’s stories. Be GONE, troll!

I get that English isn't your first language (painfully obvious in several of your stories) but after 10 years of writing fanfiction (yes, I've been a silent follower since you started) I don't see that as a legitimate reason for such silly mistakes as mixing up "rouge" with "rogue" as I know you meant to write in this story.
Like, there are so many beta readers out there, so why don't you get one since you struggle with the language?

I recently found this story and love it so much! This was a hot chapter and I’m glad I don’t have to wait for updates!

The Undecided has been voted in the Top 10 fics completed in November by visitors of www . twifanfictionrecs . com

Fantastic story. I personally loved the ending where he lived :D.
But, I really liked that they got to meet in the alternative. Thanks! Very creative, and I truly enjoyed it
:)

Aww, I’m crying now. That was a sweet ending to this alternative chapter. Debbie

This was a wonderful read, very quirky and interesting. Debbie