this was so, so sweet, thank you for posting!

So it's only the 14th of May, and it was great!

Hey! I reread this the other night and thought I’d let you know. Such a sweet, fun read! One of my favorite lines... a sweet and deeply harmonious weave of mutual love and longing...”

That was a fun read! Thank goodness Luke decided he could wait!

Of course I enjoyed it, this story is wonderful!

The best thing for me there is Luke! :D I imagined him as kind of a spy, who does his best not to get caught, and also looks for his aims (I mean - Leia and Han). His thoughts and how he perceives his friends as two life-forces which are so strongly entwined, it's incredible! No wonder he's asking himself how they managed to change their attitude toward each other and how swiftly it went. The good thing is, it happened, and Luke is glad, really glad. But really, he's so funny there, his curiosity ends when he realizes what's just started - a princess, a scoundrel, and their little making out.

And about these two - their game is so interesting! Playful and intriguing. The dialogue between them is so in-character. In addition, guys, the way you describe Han with these pink spots on him, how do you manage to make me giggle and go red so much? Leia is a lucky girl! And of course how you write all the way from a little game to a serious making out *wink* is awesome!

A great fluff, I'd say! So happy, so in love, so perfect. It was a pleasure to read it!

awwww that's so cute!

lovely!

AUGH this is so perfect. I love Luke's concern shading to amusement to relief to discomfort; I love the insight that Han and Leia are playing. I love the way they're playing, channeling their physicality and competitive natures even in joy. Their competence and intensity in ideal balance. I adore the banter, it's wonderfully timed and measured, and the way you've written the physical scenes- Han's interception run, the paint on his backside- is so acutely visual that it's pure enjoyment. No one can balance lushness and clarity like you two, and I relish it. The "comfortable tangle" just delights me, it feels so right even this early in their romantic relationship- because they really do go from antagonism to joy so swiftly.

Luke's relinquishing his urge to check up on Leia also works so well and is endearing, fitting.

I so envy and appreciate the idea of joy becoming part of a landscape forever.

Anyway, love.

Oh, very lovely. This reminds me of a scene in one of the Legends comics where Han and Leia are chasing each other around on Endor, and Luke sort of accidentally interrupts. Although, this was better because it was sweeter, and I like Luke's thoughts both at the start and finish of this much better.

Oh, this is LOVELY. Happy Beltaine, Han and Leia! Paintball, tag, tactics, joy, elation, PLAY. These two-and especially Leia-have not had opportunity for ANYTHING even touching on *carefree* in the past four year, and they've SO earned this. I love this story and what it give to them...and watching Luke's slow, Force-based sense and realization of what it was they were doing and what it meant: playing and flirting and LOVING. Thank you.

This is fantastic! Luke, thinking he had to go protect his friends...Han and Leia screwing around in the brush together like a couple of teenagers...Han grabbing Leia and tackling her to the ground and wrestling until they started making out...It was so good!

I just adore outsider perspectives on the developing relationship between these two. For a Jedi, Luke can be clueless sometimes, though. I truly did laugh out loud when Luke dove for cover (while I was also trying to warn him *away* from the situation). I have such a goofy smile on my face right now. Happy weekend! :D :D