Thank you so much for staying with this story I think it's one of the best ever. Just had a second read to refresh my memory and it's still got me gripped.

Another fine chapter. Vivid imagery and torturous to imagine being placed in Lisbon's shoes.

Beautifully written chapter. Heartbreaking, raw and real.

An amazingly well written chapter. That was a very chilling intense vision she had. And the way Jane tries to help her at all times is so sweet. Can’t wait to see what comes next. Thank you for sharing.

Your depiction of McAllister haunting Lisbon’s subconscious is chilling. Great writing and looking forward to more.

Oh surely there’s one more chapter! This is a very good story - hard to read but very good.

It's not easy to fix the wreckage left by a serial killer. She would have to haves hope that it would get better to continue trying (hell, to continue living). Is Jane's well-meaning, but inexpert help alone enough for her to get better? Looking forward to how you resolve the situation.

Are you going t carry on I hope so maybe they will get together and marry have kids. Thanks for the very good read as always and I look forward to the next instalment and link.

Enjoyed this a lot more than a bit it's a brilliant story and I hope it goes on for ages. Thank you so much.

Emotionally riveting! Lisbon has been through hell and back and desperately needs Jane's help to recover.

That was… wow… intense, heartbreaking, entirely understandable after what she went through. You did a great job. Painful to see how her brother didn't help her, wasn't there for her just when she really needed someone to lean on. Her comment about Jane's haircut was the perfect way to inject some humor into the chapter. And you couldn’t have chosen more beautiful and comforting words to end it. Thanks for sharing.

Happy New Year and I hope there is more to this thanks for the very good read as always and I look forward to the next instalment and link if any.

Vivid, depressing, understandable. You aren't hunted, raped, and nearly murdered by a serial killer without some - a lot - of fallout. It would be a miracle if she didn't have PTSD. Glad you ended on an encouraging note. Thanks for the chapter.

Apologies for the delay in reading but I am still very interested in this story. A fine chapter, chilling, actually and very nicely executed. Thank you for writing.

this is fun. thanks for keeping this going.