this is really cool and makes me wonder what ozai looks like if aang takes away his bending, or if that's even possible in this universe.

This was fun! Thank you for writing.

I enjoyed this premise in Aang's time period. This prejudice would have made things so much harder for him to learn all the elements. You did a good job getting your point across in this short story. :) Thanks for sharing it! I loved the way you described how benders look and feel too. :D

Woah, this was so cool.

Damn, so benders become something like elementals and golems when they age?
Radical, dude.
But now I’m thinking, how would taking away bending work like in TLoK?

This was awesome

boy am I glad that I reviewed! This is the first time that I had a positive impact on an author and I feel really satisfied with this chapter.

This is one weird story, but it brings out the best of the A:TLA series. Good luck with it.

So niceeeee

I NEED A SECOND CHAPTER DAMMIT. THIS IS INGENIUS.

I love this idea. Love, love, love, love it. I read this and ran away with it in my head. I'm a terrible writer, but it is a wonderful idea to entertain. I would love to see how you add onto it, if you do. I'm not pressuring you to do so, just saying that it would be wonderful.

really interesting! I'm excited to see where this goes!

this is an interesting fic, can't wait to see where it goes

Only one chapter, but chillingly amazing. It's so sad I don't know if I can handle reading more, but I'm glad I read what I did:)

This story is absolutely incredible. Would you write more? Or would you write more stories? I am totally obsessed with your writing! Truly fantastic work!