Reviews for Harry Potter and The Marvel Knights
Araytigre chapter 3 . 10/12/2019
Interesting Story thus far, kinda convoluted, but interesting. To think that we are mainly seeing back history to this point, with a lot of allusion to various groups and people, and not on what is happening currently, nor how S.H.I.E.L.D. actually captured him (with Amelia's help). Somehow,I think that there is more to Vernon's plan to be rid of Harry than meets the eye, besides the embezzlement of Company funds. For one, when he offered Harry 10K (Pounds), to which Harry countered for another 10K (to be gone longer than asked), and Vernon didn't even quible while supplying it. Now mind you, I got a kick out of his "just desserts" so to speak, so no problem there, but I'm wondering "Who" got to him, was it Dumbles (whom we haven't seen yet), or someone else altogether? Thank You. TTFN
dark blue princess chapter 1 . 9/29/2018
This sound like a ‘Persona’ game! And not just any Persona, but P5.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2018
This story is bollocks, die in a ditch.
Mink chapter 3 . 6/8/2018
I've got a question, if you hate Sauske so much, why does one of your stories have Naruto/Sauske as the pairing?
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 3 . 6/6/2018
Difficult to read with the messed up sentence structure and wrong wording. Why would Harry follow someone to a unknown terrible part of town? You really need a beta to review your work.
lokarryn chapter 3 . 6/6/2018
Personal xover?
MargaritaS chapter 2 . 5/31/2018
so much mystery and intrigue... i really want to know what the hell happened. My only criticism is that you need a beta reader, some of your misused words and odd syntax lead me to think english is not your first language... if it is then you need to read over the chapters a couple more times. but still enjoyable to read, and i would like more :)
T1962 chapter 2 . 12/15/2017
I love where this story is heading. I like the way that you switch between the present and flashbacks to tell the story. I cannot wait to read more.
Greer123 chapter 2 . 12/4/2017
Thanks for updating this story again.
Krasick chapter 2 . 11/17/2017
Its interesting so far I need moar
MoonLitReader chapter 2 . 11/14/2017
Love it
Calebros chapter 2 . 11/10/2017
ahh, the nice part only goes for the flashback, the second part is just a big mess
Calebros chapter 2 . 11/10/2017
nice chapter (would be better with the many missing words), but why is there such a big difference between the quality of the 2 chapter (this one is worse)?
dark blue princess chapter 2 . 11/10/2017
Really, P5? The ending was the beginning of P5, why?
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 2 . 11/9/2017
Good chapter but a bit confusing with the jump from Harry being with Tony to Harry being interrogated. Thanks for sharing!
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