I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, grammatical mistakes aside this had me hooked, you've nailed Makoto's personality and I love how you've given Akira so much character. Was really not expecting that shocking turn but it was great, sad that I don't get to see what's next xD

Part 8?

As much as there are still some mistakes, I really enjoyed the fanfiction so far. The story is beautifully woven with a nice suspense at the end. I just have to thank you for expanding on the story of my favourite Persona 5 couple. I hope your writing will only get better with time and while it may not be much, you are going to have my full support. Ekuuri

There's a lot you can explore with the next chapter.
-Yukiko can hear Morgana talk.
-They all discover that they're Persona.
-They discuss about being the Phantom Thieves.
There's just a lot that I hope happens next chapter.
At the very least, I hope they all find out they're Persona users.
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P.S. I made this account so I could review this again. This story has lots of potential.
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P.S.S. I hope Yukiko can hear Morgana talk.
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P.S.S.S. Do you use a source for most of the higher level words you use when you write, or do you just know these off the top of your head?

This is absolutely painful to read.
But it's engrossing.

Great Chapter.
I was wondering when Yukiko would show up.

This is getting good XD

Great chapter.

WHAT?! I'm mind blown how-what-why?! I HAVE SO MANY QUESTIONS!

Inaba is now officialy a spot to change animals into humans. Should bring koromaru next.

Awesome chapter.

Oh my god.

That cat is never going to shut up now.

WHAT THE FUCK!?

WHAT THE FUXK!?

I like the premise, but Akira is almost 18... Personally speaking I couldn't have handled half the crap Akira has, and my parents were divorced when I was 12. I think your over dramatizing this way too hard, and acting like Akira hasn't seen the world and his friends die right before his eyes. So what his parents are getting a divorce, he hasn't called or visited them in a entire year. Obviously they don't have that much influence in his life... So why would a divorce shock him into a panic, that even an interrogation couldn't force him into?