Fusing these worlds would have worked without the need to add people into Koboyashi's family. This chapter just threw me off too much, since it read like the opening to a cliche harem anime. Cant stay interested after that.

I like the concept, but if you could do it all again i'd keep the characters as they appeared in their respective anime's but in the same world.

I still don't understand why they let the army escape and not angry when they basically said they captured slaves in their face

I am sorry but this story is fairly ridiculous, not only is your writing sub standard but you literally took what made these two animes so awesome and turned it into something beyond retarded. (For example likeable characters, slice of life moments in fantastic situations, and displaying cultural differences between a fantasy world and a morden age Japan). Your OCs are as if made using a CYOA sheet and given no depth at all. The already existing characters were multilated so much you can recognize them by name only and maybe you should care to get a reality check regarding social issues like slavery and bigotry.

There are othere things but seeing as they are connected to what is mentioned above I won't list them as well.

I only now just started reading this series and I must say that I like what I have seen so far and can not wait to see what you have coming next.

please update it geting really good, i cant wait to sean finding noriko

Please update soon

Please update soon.

"The two guards were APPALLED..."
Applaud is clapping and cheering for something. Appalled is disgusted/outraged with something.

Hey dude you are doing a good job so far and the empire is basically screwed and have you taken a look at those dragon form ideas because that would be cool on this story. Also keep up the good work.

You have done a great job at this chapter and sorry that we pester you with constant asking for the story's continuation. It's just that this story works great with both shows with characters from different worlds and it works really well. So again sorry that we annoy you but we the readers cannot read your mind. Keep the good work though and I love this fanfiction more than the others.

Glad to hear that your not giving up your "Wolf of Keijo" story but what about "The Dragon Children Of Violent Rage And Prideful Destricution" I want you to continue that story because you have barley done anything with that one even though it has a lot of potential.

Hey, uh author are you breathing out there? I am asking this because your story doesn't have a chapter in weeks and I fear that you left it behind. I love your story I really do but I want know what happens next that and are there fanfictions that I to which they have not their stories yet, so please as a fan of your please keep it alive. Thank you.

I have a question do the characters that are now half dragon have the ability to turn into humanoid dragons and if yes then here some visual idea for the story if like to use them.
Kobayashi- the same dragon body as Tohru but bipedal human sized and the scale matches her hair color.
Sean- a humanoid version of Lucoa's dragon form but the wing are made of keyblades.
Jessica- a humanoid version of Kanna's dragon form.
Makoto- a humanoid Blue Dragon from FFVIII.
But anyways I'm looking forward to the next chapter of your story and your doing a great job so far.

WHY WON'T YOU GET BACK TO THE WOLF OF KEIJO I WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?

I feel awful for Noriko. She definitely didn't deserve to go through any of that shit. I hope Sean tears Corthal a new one and hunts down the sick bastard's friends for what they did to her. Please don't put this on hiatus just because you're starting another new story.