So, Carlisle is bi?, love the story btw, great descriptions and the concept is something I've never had the opportunity to read. Great work, keep it up!

Great story, loved the twist. I hope you write more of this, make the pace slower. Built up to the big reveal. Good luck with the contest.

OMG tell me you're gonna extend it... What a fantastic story, Ninkita! Oh well ... that's you we're talking about, you're a master with your words *winks*
Thank you dear and congratulations!

Hmmm... This didn't turn out how I thought it would. Creative, sure, but the past life thing for this story didn't seem to fit to me. However, it was an interesting read.

wow this is amazing I love it so much

Interesting plot... thank you for sharing!

Good luck. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.

Very unique with the past lives. I like it!

Wow, well, that's definitely a new idea. Very interesting plot, I hope you'll continue. Some parts were a little rushed like the kissing or the suddenly in love thing, but I think your story has potential. I'm very interested on what you're gonna make out of this story and hope you update soon!

I was enchanted by this original, beautiful love story. So happy for both of them. Alice can be as smug as she likes. :)

Best dang plot idea I've seen in a long time! How cool is THIS? Love it.

Thank you for entering the contest, and best of luck!

This is a unique and intriguing premise upon which you have written this story. I like it very much. I hope you continue it and change the rating to M. Thanks for entering the contest.

Really interesting twist to the E/B/C pairing. This could definitely be expanded and I'd love to read what happens next (or before)? Good luck in the contest.

Interesting. What a unique idea. Thanks for writing

I'd like to see B's various lifetimes expanded, even though that might be very sad to read. Interesting concept. Thanks for participating.