This story was amazing! Thank you so much for writing this!

Brilliant proposal.
The whole chapter was so cute, romantic and perfect.

omg this was so amazing... think i read it when it was a One shots... who can forget a naked killian in a bathtub...can't wait to read the epilogue

Loved the wedding and the proposal!

That was a really sweet addition! And the way he proposed. Just loved it! Great work!

That was a beautiful ending! :D

I think any trip with friends is going to include drama, let alone a trip to a wedding. As well that ends well, and this ended very well for Emma and Killian. Also what's a little humor and awkward moment with a little kid. Nice chapter

Great chapter! I can definitely see David running his mouth after a few beers. He's always a bit overprotective when it comes to Emma. I'm glad she called him out on it though and let Killian know about her feelings for the future.

Killian in a kilt... hot damn! :D

I'm glad you will end this properly as its a brilliant story!

loved this chapter!

To the Guest reader who, left this review: ”The dildo stuff was a bit much and seemed out of character for both of them. Like if was just thrown in for the shock and so Leo could find it and make embarrassing comments about it.”

I understand the scene was not for everyone, which is exactly why I added the astericks to make it easy to skip. I am sorry it bothered you, though. As for it being OOC, I appreciate your opinion, but a lot of couples are doing this these days, so would it be ooc for them too? E and K like trying things and exploring their sexualities which I have shown in previous chapters. I only wanted to show that they both are equals in their relationship. For him to give himself to her completely, like she has for him is part of the ”every part of you” theme of their relationship, so it doesn't seem ooc to me, but that is only my opinion.

And no, I didn't write that scene for the humor afterwards. Leo finding the dildo was only a byproduct of the smut scene and was not originally planned.

Thanks for your review!

This chapter is really sexy and funny! Killian in a kilt would make my jaw hit the floor!

The dildo stuff was a bit much and seemed out of character for both of them. Like if was just thrown in for the shock and so Leo could find it and make embarrassing comments about it

Glad your continuing this story but a bit annoyed that their friends/family still feel the need to lecture Killian about how he treats Emma. She is just as much to blame for problems they've had in the past as Killian but they all feel like it's their place to remind him of things he's done. Even his own brother goes against him.

First the bedroom scene lol I couldn't believe Liam and Killian. Joining the club was believable but boy nobody was letting them off the hook. Also fun that they pretended to be married. And I'm glad the brothers eventually made up.