I would like to start out by saying this was more well put together than the previous one as far as grammar and that wall of text thing I mentioned. You can see your experience as a writer having grown.

The story was very emotionally evoking for me. I was ANGRY at what the Diary did, at the misunderstandings, I was heartbroken when the death occurred and when truths began to come out. It is the token of good writing that can make someone feel real emotions, a so I congratulate you.

Why!? Why are they hiding?! They should have stayed there, explained what they found out and get it sorted!

Ugh, her seeing Hermione and Harry kiss was just unnecessary

I want to let you know this series has been a blessing during quarantine 2.0. I’ve been reading it for three days straight, and have every intention of finishing the entire series before I leave quarantine! Thank you so much!

This has been a terrific year to read. Liked what you did with the horcruxes. Hope that Harry and coe can find out about more and destroy them soon. Glad that Harry's on the mend and Ginny too. But they've still got so long to go, Harry with his leg and Ginny with all of the lingering affects of the possession. Relieved that Ginny won't be staying with Molly, she's not recovered from her own manipulations to become anything close to a fit mother for Ginny for a long time if she'll ever be a suitable parent. Thanks so much for all of the time and dedication you've put into making such a wonderful series. Onto the next fic in the series.

This fanfic is probably the only one that I’ve read yet that actually explained what I’d thought about how and why the horcruxes were the way that I figured them to be... While they were pieces of his soul, they were not just non sentient pieces, but actually parts of him that would certainly have gone mad as a hatter with their isolation and other issues that Moldy-shorts had been dealing with since he first broke off the first piece...

I’m definitely enjoying your stories, even though I generally prefer longer reads...

Yeah, awesome! Love it! Thanks for sharing!

You know the Horcruxes are one point that were left unclear enough to be fair game without explenation. So, I skipped the explenation and just rolled with it. Brillant idea and perfect build up :-)

Another one done. Excellent work as always! I was telling my wife about your work in general, as well as this story in particular and your ability to have me tearing with emotion one minute and gasping in disgust the next. I REALLY, REALLY hope the last story is done when I get there. Seriously though..no pressure...

Such a great spin on the story! I can't stop reading

Plenty safe. story is coming along famously

I am enjoying the fic. At this point you are almost worse than George R Martin was to the starks. The poor Weasley's just cannot catch a break.

Um... Why's everybody freaking out at what Harry did? It's not like they DIDN'T already know about him being a parselmouth BEFORE now, seeing how he has Kaa with him last year and everybody who saw them together saw him talking with her in parseltongue.

Though Draco is an idiot. Knowing full well that Harry was a parselmouth, why the heck did he use a spell that summoned a SNAKE to sic on Harry during the duel? What did he expect to happen? That Harry WOULDN'T stop to talk to the snake and the snake WOULDN'T listen to the resident snake speaker and NOT attack the snake speaker?

HOW CAN YOU YOU DO THAT TO DOBBY!

FYI::I detest the character known as Hermione, gag. It was a travesty of justice and like a kick in the gut to have you write that she got Hedwig instead of Harry. I have never liked Hermione. I've ben reading FF ever since the first one was ever printed and only read ones where she was not an important figure in it. Loved the Hermione and Ron bashings. By the way I am now 87 yrs old and unless you have been writing since I began reading I take it you are quite young. Don't get me wrong I really like reading your fics as you generally do a great job but my do I hate Hermione. She's a cruel mutt in this fic and I'd like to see her get killed off sooner than later. That's what being a prisoner in my Apt because of the Corona Virus does to my thinking so I'm reading everything new being printed. Do take care of yourself during this trying time and take the Virus seriously. God Bless you.