This. this story right here so far has been one of the two actually decent fist pov stories I've managed to find so far that I can stomach. Thoroughly enjoying this story so far.

I’m gonna re-read this

Oh god. That is a lot of money. I already know a “sly” raccoon who would so want to steal that golden carrot before a certain foxy inspector tried a to stop him and his friends.

If you don’t know who I am talking about, it is Sly Cooper, the Cooper Gang, and Carmelita Fox

A wonderful story and congratulations of finishing your first fanfic. It was quite a creative tale with lots of craziness and enjoyable moments and I very much enjoyed it. I can't wait for your next stories! _

Yay! They're together! Took them a while but finally, yay! I loved the confession Judy has as well as Nick's inner thoughts. It was a nicely and we'll scripted chapter so good work!

Looks like Judy and Jean had a nice heart to heart and helped each other out a bit. And what a crazy chase too! Was quite fun to read this chapter and hopefully that sheriff shows up soon so Judy can go after Nick. I can't imagine he's in a good place at the moment. Get chapter!

Looks like after a good night's sleep Nick has come to his senses and has been able to think things over. I'm guessing maybe later on Jean can realize what Nick meant and they can still be friends. I can understand her frustrations though. Maybe Judy can get through with her and they can still be friends.

And boy or boy does it look like Nick's in for a Wilde ride. XD A great chapter with lots of emotions and details that really brought it to life. Great job! _

Seems like they are healing their rift a little bit. Still a ways to go before Judy admits her feelings though. Hopefully she can.

I believe the sleep deprivation must have messed with Nick's mind by now for him to consider this at all, even under the circumstances. Get some sleep, Nick lol.

Looks like Judy had a good talk with her sister, and it may have opened her eyes a bit as well. Hopefully things go well with her talk with Nick. It will be interesting to see how things play out with everyone.

Oh boy, Judy, you're in trouble now lol. You got the hots for Nick after just trying to set him up for Jean. XD I wonder how this is going to play out. XD

Hmm, I hope he tells Judy of the plot he has uncovered. If he doesn't, I'm sure it's the sleep deprivation.

And that is why you don't drink, Judy, because this is what happens when you do. And BunnyBurrow, seems to have a lot of problems it has to deal with. Seems like everyone was suffering in this chapter.

I see the perspective has shifted to Judy. I'm guessing if we entered Nick's mind it would be storm clouds raining on him after what Judy did to help him out. I'm sure eventually she'll figure it out. _

Ooooh boy. XD I think Judy only heard part of a conversation and Judy took it the wrong way. XD I can't wait to see how noots this is going to be for them. XD

Love the atmosphere you created in the bar. Really helped craft the image of Stu telling that story. Great work!