Reviews for Thieving Hearts and Free Will |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow rereading this and still one of the best. The exorcism was chilling and thrilling! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully you continue this one day, its very well-written |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh jeez zuko is in a pickle! An interesting pickle! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Characters are on point |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! This story is so interesting! Kudos and follows XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good story. However, the Ocean Spirit, La, is female. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Try not to include so much unaltered canon. We've all seen the episodes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's easy. Sokka's boomerang hit Zuko and Aang yelled for Katara. Btw, I'm enjoying the story. It's different and more creative than most zutara fics. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Greats story! I love the premise and can't wait to see where this goes! Please update when you can! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cannot wait for more! A new approch that I am totally in love with. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() I'm really excited to read the next chapter of this story! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() Nice. There were a few typos so some stuff didn't make sense to me but other than that it was great! A very realistic reaction of the villagers to Zuko - in a way I think they are quite generous of the villagers to look after the firebending children instead of ostracising them completely or god knows doing what to them. I wouldn't mind an explanation as to why some villagers (especially the more angry ones) agree to tolerate them. Ming-Na is awesome! Love her as a character. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() I really like your story! Zuko with the children - so sweet! And realistic at the same time! Kudos! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm actually glad you included this. It's good for Zuko's development. |