This was lovely, I really enjoyed your writing style throughout the entire story. Bella as a newborn was a fun take on what it could be like, as in canon she never really seems to act like one. I'm also a sucker for Bella and Jasper and it was really cute to watch them fall in love. I'm also a huge fan of Rose and Emmett so this really worked for me. Thank you for such a cute story!

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Loved it

This is an amazing story. It is hilarious and heartwarming and so adorable!

Love it and wish it hadn't ended!

Very nice story and a very nice touch with the epilogue.

I have really enjoyed reading this story! I liked that she didn't just wake up from the change and everything was perfect as it is in the books. And that she had to work hard and work through many things before she could be around the others and eventually humans. The bites she shared with Jasper, Rosalie, and Emmett were also very cool, as well as their cuddle times! Thanks for sharing!

Great story with a realistic approach to how the relationships could have changed. In addition, I really appreciated the feeling of family that you promoted throughout the story including scenes where they forgave a family member, but still pranked them slightly. For example, the pinecones to punish Alice added humor while also being completely realistic. I really enjoyed these little touches you added.

This was nice. I really enjoyed it.

I cant Express the incredible joy I have with this fic. I'm blow to pieces. The last chapter stole my soul and now I'm a mess a tears looking like an uncooked McDonald's hamburger patty. Bravo to

Sweet ending

Nice relationship

Great character development

Ty jasper

I like your take