good story so far and great writing but you kind of forgot about the Denalis in the fight and they were never mention again lol, also.. did Laurent went away with them? i hope not jaja i still don't like him and i hope he doesn't trick Irina... btw shouldn't Kate be spending more time with Paul?

Speaking about the fight, Bella should have kept Victoria's arm and throw it in the fire with James, am I right? ..also, shame Alice didn't get to know about her past.

i'm curious to see Rosalie and Bella sharing more traits.. mainly i hope Rose can get pregnant some way someday iynwim ;)

I have to say I am really loving this story. I gotta push pause on reading... but I’ll be back to finish what is here and look forward to seeing all that happens.

can't wait for the next chapter in this story

This is a good fic, especially since your characters seem real and interactions between them occur smoothly. However, the final showdown was a huge disappointment. While it's clear that you needed to clear Victoria alive for further drama down the line, the fact that she managed to escape, despite the entire La Push Pack, Bella and the best of the Cullen fighters being there screams plot armor. Another confusing thing is that none of them seem to be worried about her escape, despite knowing exactly how a vampire would react after losing their mate.

Agh this was all so cute!

May 30th as in 2020 :o ? okaaaay this has made my day ! I loved the build up, how sometimes Rosalie ran cold then so hot afterwards, I liked your story a lot and hope to see more soon, good luck with the rest !

Great update please come back soon

Loved this story! Really well written.

I am SUPER happy you are updating again!

A wonderful update! I know they have a long way to go but I love seeing bella and rose together being cute

Amazing !

That was so awesome! I hope you don't mind me indulging the belief that my comment yesterday helped get this chapter out today! Lol! Really good story and glad theres more still to come!

Thank you for the new chapter! It got me so excited!

I can't wait for their date and their happy after :)

Hey Greye just a little heads up you might have forgotten to post this chapter to AO3 too. Thanks for the update, I managed to almost perfectly time my re-read with the latest chapter. Still as amazing a read as always. Hope all is good in Greye world. Much love