A very interesting interpretation of a fusion of the initial story line and the one we got

I'm definitely interested in where you're planning on taking this story. Hopefully you continue it! You have a pretty good writing style as well. Very easy to read and understand.

Throwing in my vote for more chapters. I could read what you write all day. And I'm thrilled to read this. Those deleted scenes, those first trailers, are what initially got me excited for FFXV. I've always been sad that they were changed, so when I read the summary for this story, I immediately clicked the link. Plus, it was written by you. The stories that you write have a dramatic way of pulling in the reader and immersing them in the world you create.