An incredible story. Sad but incredible. I really want to see the aftermath.

1. Wow just Fuckin Wow!
2. It is possible 4 Tori 2 survive this! Trina or her parents could come home in time 2 save her!
3. I get the break-up thing, they r so NOT fun! Though, I'm the oppisite w/ food; I eat more when I'm upset!
4. I've been depressedmyself b4, but never this extreme!
5. I agree bout interest in future Ch.'s!

So intense *single tear drops from eye*

An aftermath chapter would be nice. To see into the friend's reactions. And Jade too. Maybe Jade will feel guilty and Cat will have to help her through it. Or something like that. Idk

wow just wow

Sad. Tori was too young to let a breakup affect her that much. But some people, they just need to be loved. Still, sad.

Wow, you weren't kidding, this was dark but at the same time so emotional.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

It was really really good it sucked that she had to die. but I haven't read something that good in a while.

You weren't kidding about this being dark. Sad but well-done.