It is written very exciting. I look forward to how it goes on.

Kero-chan is the real shit love me that flying bear lol

omg I love you! Love Tsubasa Chronicles so much !

I Fudge'n love this story! The plot is simply spectacular.

please update soon

CONCEPT: 7/10
IMPLEMENTATION: 4/10
CREATIVITY: 4/10
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT:3/10
WRITING STYLE:6/10
FURTHUR NOTES: This work is rife with over used inaccurate cliches, blatant ableism, and subtle sexism.

You're delivery of delicate topics is lackluster at best and actively portrays negative, harmful stereotypes. Wrapping them in overused cliches and stereotypes warps the narrative, reduces readability, and has a significant negative impact on the qaulity of this work.

Despite this, I do feel that you have a great deal of potential as a writer. Do research when addressing delicate topics, polish your work, and continue to hone your skills through practice.

I wish you had continued this I really like many of your works but their almost all incomplete plus some are rather short and incomplete. Thank you for writing them anyway its nice to see that much creativity I've been working my way through your stories from oldest to newest for the past few days and have yet to find one I didnt like heck I've even read some of them before. Hope you have been staying safe with all the chaos that's been going on.

Best wishes
Abriv

please update im loving this

It was a good chapter, I will look forward to the next update!

I absolutely love this story! Great job writing it, it’s amazing!

This is the best fanfic I ever read eversince I finished Hitman reborn! I hope you still have plans on continuing this fic because this is amazing!

yeet, i love this make more

time travel is fun

omg finally SOMEONE who knows Mai Otome! yes!

Second time reading this, and I still love it. I hope you update soon.

AAAAAAAAA KAWAIIII DESUUUUUUU