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Guest chapter 56 . 9/2
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Guest chapter 54 . 7/11
Wow. This story took me on an emotional roller coaster. I laughed and I cried. So many shocking twists and turns. ️ Those are just a few emojis to express what I was thinking/feeling as I read this story. There are so many more I could type. Each chapter was so good, I just wanted to keep reading. I couldn’t do anything else but read this for 3 days straight. I was obsessed. (I did take a break for Olitz yoga on IG of course lol) I loved your story. Amazing work. Can’t wait to start the sequel. Thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21
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CharlieTsAngel chapter 54 . 5/28
Yes, yes…. Yaaaassssss, Olivia, git it, git it one more time before he leaves…. Fitz, you need one for the road….

LMBO, that’s right Olivia, let him know what it does to you…. It’s nice and big, long and thick….. And most of all, he knows how to use it….. Hell yeeeeeeessssssssssssssssssss!

Ok, he has to go back to the Compound, reluctantly both feeling the same about him leaving… Not wanting him to go. He told her his mission may be over soon and he should be home for good next time. (Fingers and toes crossed that he gets to come home for good real soon…

Fitz is back at the Compound, they stopped over in Germany where he had tattoos put on his back inside another tattoo with Olivia’s and Lily’s names…. Awwwwwww, how sweet… I can imagine his face as he’s telling Olivia and she’s all smiles as well…. His special two ladies….. (I’m all smiles too when he was telling her.) This was so special. Glad he sent Olivia a picture…. Hoping nothing ever happens to him. But this would be an empirical factor for her.

Fitz is so excited, this could be it…. His time with the Deltas will soon come to an end. His obligation to them would be over. He texted Olivia asking her to send him a selfie of her and Lily…. She sends him her and Lily taking a bath…. I’m sure that didn’t help him missing her, just made him want to get home faster…. So he needs to make sure he stays focus. I wouldn’t put anything pass the Deltas trying to extend his stay… So concentrate Fitz, stay focus, you’re one step from being home for good…. With your family….

Why do I feel like the ball is about to drop?

Mmmmmmm, what plan does Fitz have for Aiko and Anton that he needs them to look like him behind the mask? Or does he think they are planning something for him and he’s not going to make it easy for them?

Olivia has her pregnancy kits….. I’m sure she suspects what the results are, she’s anxious for them to find out together… (So am I, I can’t hardly wait either. Get home Fitz.)

Freak, what’s going on, Fitz is not answering…. I know they went on a mission, but was it supposed to last more than one day? (Olivia, I’m worried too. I don’t trust the Deltas either.)

Erin, I know you’re trying to help, but a woman knows when there is something wrong with her man… Her gut never lies….

“News Break”…. They announced Fitz had been beheaded. Erin tried not to let Olivia hear it, but she did while she was in the kitchen preparing Lily’s lunch for the day with her at her job. I know everything within her stopped at that moment…. I picture her dropping to the floor screaming “Nooooooooooo”. (I know because that’s how I felt when I friend’s sister called me to tell me he had been in a fatal car accident. I knew all day something was out of place, something was wrong. So yes, I know the feeling. Two days after his birthday. I’ll never forget it.) I’m crying crocodile tears for Olivia and Lily… Especially Olivia because Lily won’t understand the pain right now…. Sonia and Erin both are trying to console her…. But nothing will take away that pain… They say time heals all wounds… This wound never heals. You just learn how to deal with it. Love never dies or go away….. (Hydro, girl, you got me ugly crying over here right now…)

Wow, she’s not eating which isn’t good for the baby if she is pregnant…. But I truly understand what she’s going through… OMG, after finally getting out of bed she passes out… Oh no, I hope she doesn’t lose the baby if she is pregnant. She’s in the hospital so let me continue reading so I can find out what’s going on…..

Ok, she’s woke. She fainted due to dehydration. She holding Lily knowing she needs to try for her sake to hold it together.

Yes, Dr. Brand confirmed what they (her & Fitz) knew, she’s pregnant. I’m sure she’s both happy and sad as she stated the reasons to herself why she felt that way….

Oh my… that letter to her from Fitz was… so overwhelming. But it gave her the strength she needs to push forward and plan his funeral….. And yes Olivia, they need to provide you with Fitz’s body…. You need to be able to identify that it’s indeed him who was beheaded…. And please do not tell anyone about the tattoos of you and Lily’s names. That’s your verification…. I knew it was going to come in handy one day… And this will be your proof whether or not he’s rally dead unless someone planned it and put the tattoos on the body that may not be his. I hope he deleted it from his phone once he sent it to you also…. Ok…. Let me keep reading, Lawd, I need to know what happened to him…. Was he ambushed?

Olivia could finish the Eulogy because to her, without Fitz body, he was not dead…. Is there a cover up. Why couldn’t they recover his body, he was a General after all… And supposedly dead…

Well, look who shows up to the funeral…. Abby and Huck….. I’m actually glad they came after Olivia left the stage… They don’t know it was Erin. At least I don’t think they do. Let me keep reading…..

So only Abby attended the Funeral… I was thinking her side kick Huck was with her. But she’s here alone… That’s right Olivia, keep gathering the pieces of the puzzle. The pieces will soon fall into place and make sense…

So Abby came to deliver the message that Fitz was dead since the Navy wouldn’t give her Fitz body… And they know she won’t stop until she get some answers…. So what are they really hiding from Olivia? Is Fitz really dead, because he gut says he isn’t….. (I’ve gotta keep reading… I need to know what really happened to him.)

What the Freak! Fitz is alive, lost his memory, Huck and Harrison has made the decision to keep Fitz there away from his family….. At least Abby isn’t in total agreement with their plan. But she didn’t tell Olivia the truth either… Huck and Harrison better hope like hell Fitz doesn’t regain his memory or they are going to be the ones dead…. Like Aiko and Anton….

And Huck because you, Aiko, Anton and Harrison was behind Olivia’s kidnapping is the reason you two will be next once Fitz discover who he is… His memory is eventually going to come back…. Love will over conquer that no matter how long it takes… You and the rest better not be around when that happens…. He’s gonna be like Hercules when he killed everyone for killing his family… Only you tried to kill Olivia and failed… Now you’re saying he’s dead to keep him from his family, only to keep him there…. You have messed up big time now buddy… So I hope you have everything in order because you are going to pay dearly for this one….

That’s right tell Huck Abby, it’s gonna be his funeral when Fitz’s memory returns and knows he was behind everything….

Wow…. That was heart wrenching….. But I’m glad to know Fitz is still alive….. I’m also glad I get to move on to the sequel to read how long it takes for his memory to return and what happened while he was fighting his way back to his previous life. What about Olivia and Lily? Will she still be pregnant or would she have had the baby… Those are questions I have as I move onto the sequel. I’m so glad I don’t have to wait…. I’m ending this review so I can move on to the sequel can curious minds needs answers…

Thank you Hydra for this portion and peek into the beginning of Fitz, Olivia, Lily and possibly a son this time or another daughter…. I’m excited and sad at the same time… But I must move on….. I need to know… Thanks again …

Ciao,
Ms. Lady C.
CharlieTsAngel chapter 53 . 5/27
I am so loving the fact that Fitz finally came home to make things right with Olivia…. He is so stubborn and jealous until he loses all of his senses…. Yes, it was his fault. He should have never asked her to do it if he couldn’t handle watching her… He should have just left until Huck said he had the info they needed…. (I’m smh Fitz…. You really messed up big time. You better hope she forgives you.)

I can’t believe Olivia didn’t even sense that Fitz or at least someone was in her bedroom when she walked in. But I guess she was distracted by her conversation on the phone. And with guards always on the property, she didn’t have a reason to be weary of anyone being there….. But Lily saw her Dad… Smh not understanding why Olivia didn’t…. I’m glad she didn’t drop Lily when she saw him. But I guess her protective skills kicked in and she would had held onto her tighter….

Ok, I need y’all to talk and work this thing out…

Olivia’s not playing, she’s still pissed with him, apology or not, he found the ring, so what….. She needs to get it all out before, (hopefully) she forgives him… (Reading…..)

Ok, he would let her go….. He kissed her…. She eventually kissed him back knowing she couldn’t resist him any longer… Then magic happened… two weeks had been long enough, she needed to feel him inside of her….. “Magic” Happened, but they didn’t think about the IUD was no longer a bearer between them and a possible pregnancy which she’s ready for another baby… But Fitz wants to wait until he’s home from the Deltas for good. Which I truly understands….

But I’m glad they made up….. And make up sex is always good…. (Wink, wink)

Listening to one of Prince’s live concerts…. And he’s singing “Do Me Baby”… that was Olivia when he kissed her and she pulled his pajama bottoms down and he was inside her like a strike of lightning … And it was obliviously they both needed it because if they blinked they would have missed the explosion the way Fitz said it only lasted a minute…. LMBO… Glad the riff is over between them…. I needed “happy” Olitz… Lol…. ;-D)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Glad he knows she was talking about the apartment in NY they’d discussed before, not one she was getting to leave him… Whew, so am I. He had me thinking she was moving out too… The $50 million dollar apartment they looked at and he told her to get it….. Yeah! (All Smiles)

Go head girl….. Let Fitz know who’s in charge tonight…. You want some…. And he’s gonna give it to you, birth control or not…. You want him! Yaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssss!

Prince singing Sexual Temptation and every sexual song along with Olivia and Fitz making sweet gentle love…. DAY-UM ….! Breathe…. I’m trying to!

They had a good conversation, but I think that first go around the little Fitz was in the making….

Olivia, girl, I’m laughing with you about Fitz throwing out the boxes in your closet… Girl, he couldn’t wait to throw those bad boys away….. Hollering, LMBO!

OMG, I’m really hollering now….. After Olivia meets Fitz and Lily coming in the door with food from the diner, he had to also mention he picked up some condoms while he was out…. So I guess he knew he wasn’t always going to be able to put out…. LMBO! Well ….. I see it didn’t take long for them to put the condoms to good use after Lily went down for her nap…. Yaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssss!

Carmen, girl, you’re pushing your luck, Fitz already told you he’s not giving you a job at his company… Leave it along, girl…

Yeah Fitz, Olivia knew what you meant when you said you gave Carmen the same penis you’re going to give her upstairs when Lily falls asleep, but I’m hollering, because yes.. It definitely came out wrong… But I think she knew what you meant….. (Still hollering...) Olivia, I know you’re not worried, but Carmen is mad that you’re getting what she’s missing…. LMBO!

OMG! I’m hollering…. The condoms from Fitz’s nightstand in his home Lucky is staying in, (His room is off limits)…. Are apparently old and tore once he entered Olivia’s honey pot… No wonder it was feeling so good to him….. (I’m LMBO, Fitz, I’m hollering.) You tore the condom… Yeah….

Lawd…. I’m Laughing My Butt Off! I’m rolling…. The condom is at the base of his penis and he said “No wonder why it felt so good. I forgot it was on!” I’m rolling in the floor y’all… Fitz is hilarious right now….. He got lost in the throws of passion… What condom he’s asking himself… (Hol-le-ring…)

I think the Universe want y’all to have another baby too Fitz…

Uh, Olivia, you just described some of the symptoms of early pregnancy… Tender breast, wanting more sex, and the wetness…. Yep, sounds like some symptoms to me…. Lol,

Carmen, I wish Lucky would walk up behind you while you’re masturbating ease dropping on Fitz giving it good to Olivia…. Makes me wonder if Lucky is satisfying your needs…. Maybe you just need to let him know how you like it so you can move one from Fitz…. But size does matter…. But you can help him to use what he has….. (smh…. And rolling my eyes as her stupid, contrite azz.)

OMG! Carmen came while listening to them…. OMG! Then she snuck her azz back downstairs to Lucky…. Why didn’t someone catch her azz in the act?

How could Carmen give up….. Give up what…. She can’t give up what she never had…. And she never had Fitz. She was just his booty call….. She needs to know the difference…

Yep, I guess it was time for Carmen to go…. Fitz is showing Olivia too much PDA for her liking…. Sorry, not sorry Carmen. Get a new life girl, because Fitz will never be yours.

Olivia fell asleep on Fitz…. I guess so after all that good loving he put on her upstairs… Get home, take a shower and be ready for round three now that you’ve knocked the edge off your sleep…. LMBO… (Clap, clap…. Hercules, Hercules… That’s Fitz)… Yaaaaaaaasssssssssssss!

Thanks for the warning about the last Chapter coming up…. Looking forward to the sequel as well…. (All smiles for now).

This was a really good Chapter… You kept me in stitches for the most part…. Loved it… Make up sex…. And horny Olivia, better yet, probably pregnant Olivia…. (Still Smiling)

Ciao,
Ms. Lady C.
CharlieTsAngel chapter 52 . 5/27
Awww, Fitz took his family and Lily’s Nanny to Paris with him….. Mmmmm, will they have fun or will Abby and Huck get their way and draw Olivia into the plan secretly hoping to wreck habit on their marriage know how jealous and protective Fitz is concerning Olivia. They think getting rid of Olivia will keep Fitz with them….. So they think…. So I need to read and see how this operation goes. Will Abby be able to pull it off or will she succeed in pulling Olivia in? But my real question is, Will Abby try to do it or will she fake it and not succeed? (You know in my mind I’m thinking that Bi-atch won’t even try hard enough because she and Huck wants Olivia to do it.)

I’m so loving Lily becoming a toddler… She is too cute and definitely a Daddy’s girl. I was hollering… At first Olivia was finning jealous when Fitz seemed to be giving Lily all his attention when he arrived… But when he kissed Olivia and Lily pushed his face away from her Mom twice….. I thought I would ROTFLMBO….. She is just too cute and typical toddler
reaction.

Fitz takes Olivia on a surprise date and it’s the Eiffel Tower. He rented out the entire restaurant for the night… Wow, what a man who loves his wife…

Olivia, girl, you know you can’t be teasing Fitz about you being with some other man….. You know he’s serious about cutting his head off…. (I’m hollering… ;-D))))))))))))))…) That’s right girl… stop with the teasing….. Lol
OMG….. No he didn’t lick his finger and…. (*)(*) … Breathe girl, breathe…. Whew!

I’m listening to Quincy Jones’s “Secret Garden”, where Fitz has Olivia right now….. All to himself….. In his Secret Garden (restaurant) at the Effie Tower….. Yaaaaaaasssss, Yaaaassss!

And the surprise he had for her was the surprise of all surprises…. Fitz knows he’s a freak. I would have never thought he would have had sex with her at the restaurant even though it was only them and the Waiters…. Uh, ummmmm Fitz….

Mmmmmmmm, Olivia suggested they leave Lily with Sonia for the night so they can have some alone time together which consisted of another round after letting him know she was ready for another baby…. Uhmmmm firl, you’re speaking his language. He doesn’t mind the practice in order to achieve the prize…. Lol… But yes, I hope he’ll be done with the Deltas too when that happens….

OOOOOOOOOOOOOO, WOW!
Olivia’s IUD caused complications and lodged in her uterus… Oooo my goodness….. I hope she’ll be alright and this doesn’t cause any future fertility problems since she just told Fitz earlier she was ready for another baby…. (But those things are known to move out of place from time to time. Several women have even gotten pregnant with them supposedly in place.)

Oh freak, almost forgot why they are there… The Gala is planned for the even…. She should sit that one out….

Olivia slicked Fitz hair back has him looking like a gangster sexy azz boss for other women to swoon over.. But we know that’s all that’s going to happen… They can look as long as they don’t touch… He belongs to one woman only…

Sorry Abby, apparently red heads aren’t his cup of tea tonight… Plus you wasting his drink probably didn’t help matters either… Let him cool off a little. Cause that’s the oldest trick in the book and he’s not buying into it…Nope, Nada…

Ooohh Freak, Chalamet is not feeling Abby at all. He’s threating to have her thrown out by his guards if she touches him “one” more time… WTH Abby…. You can’t even do one assignment… But wait a minute… You really didn’t want to do it anyway. You wanted Olivia to do it so she can flirt with Chalamet in front of Fitz to piss him off because that’s what Eli use to have her doing…. Seduce men and he would kill or take everything they had… Cut we all know it back fired when she met Fitz…

So now he has to call Olivia because Abby didn’t try hard enough to do her job…. Fitz knows he’s going to live to regret making that phone call…. But unbeknownst to him, that was the Delta’s plan to draw tension between Olivia and Fitz hoping he would come back to them for good… Therefore leaving his family…. (I’m saying a small prayer for them to get through this night with their love still in tack. We know how jealous Fitz can get… And he already feeling guilty about her no longer having the IUD.)

Woooowwww, he even had to take her wedding rings off for her to get into the role of seducing Chalamet…. Why couldn’t Abby just do her freakin’ job? (Mean face)

I don’t think Olivia and Fitz should have had that brief conversation about her early problem with the IUD where the Deltas could hear…. No telling how they will use that piece of information to their advantage…

After Chalamet touched Olivia’s leg I’m sure it took everything in Fitz not to break both of his hands… Man what a torture he must be going through… And Olivia had to play it off… My heart aches for both of them….. (Sad face)

Woah, no Chalamet isn’t calling Fitz a child because he’s younger than his butt…. (Looking at Chalamet sideways (*)(*) )

Lawd….. Fitz had taken all he could with Chalamet touching Olivia… And that kiss almost got Chalamet a death wish and his fingers broke when he tried to touch her legs again…. Fitz has been drinking while watching Olivia with Chalamet…. I wonder what kind of mood he’s in now after grabbing her off the stool when Huck said he has the info from Chalamet’s phone….

Pissed is not the word for Fitz’s mood, it’s more like a Panther stomping around wanting to pounce on his opponent. He’s smelling blood he wants to draw from Chalamet’s body…. (I feel ya Fitz. Chalamet went to freakin far. But don’t take it out on Olivia. You asked her to do it. She was only helping you out the best way she thought she could… Without drawing suspicion to Chalamet something was up.)

Fitz, you brought that on yourself….. I don’t blame Olivia one bit asking you for a divorce when she was trying to help your azz out…. Surely, maybe she should have move his hand the first time, second and …. But he didn’t get a third time because you almost broke his fingers….. She did it to make it look real so she could get the information Abby’s azz couldn’t do. And I’m sure all of them were somewhere smiling and clapping because they knew you were pissed…. So yes, Olivia, grab Lily and Sonia and go back to LA and leave his butt there to think about what he said to you…

Sorry Fitz, but you are too late brotha, they are gone….

I am so sad for them. My heart is breaking…. I knew Fitz was going to regret it… I just knew it… Moving on to the next Chapter…..

Ciao,
Ms. Lady C.
CharlieTsAngel chapter 51 . 4/5
So someone was following Olivia to her Studio and home for approximately three days. At least that’s what the time stamp on the photos shows. But the good thing, the photos doesn’t include him or Erin, which may help him in whatever plan he can come up with to get Olivia and Lily to a safe, secured dwelling. She’s been labeled as a terrorist. The President has to know Olivia is his wife. He’s trying to figure out who would do this and why. But the main thing is how is he going to get around the President who he doesn’t need or want a beef with right now? (Fitz, I don’t know how you are going to do this, but I’m sure you will. They are your life… Your reason for living.) C’mon, think….)

Woah, y’all…. I think I would have almost had a heart attack too, to wake up with mask men standing over me…. Thank goodness she kept her cool. Her previous training kicked in. I wanted to holler at Fitz’s second text message about her thinking it was a snake in the Tent, but this is a laughing matter right now. She’s got to move fast so she can get to Fitz as soon as possible. Hopefully Erin won’t ask too many questions about where she’s going…

If the President assume Olivia killed his father and brother knowing it was Eli, because Eli was blackmailing him, then he should know Olivia is his wife. Unless someone intentionally left that little bit of info off the documents and photos. Would explain why he’s not in any of the photos. And nor does the “said” mystery person want the President to know she has an identical twin. Uhmmmmm, why is the million dollar question?

Apparently this incompetent man does know Olivia is his wife and Lily is his daughter…. WTFreak! Plus he must be crazier if he thinks Fitz is just going to hand over Olivia to him…. Not, nada… Not in this lifetime buddy….

Woah, I guess and hope that matter is settled with the President. Because Fitz gave him the 411 he apparently did not know. But he knows it now and if any harm comes to his wife or child, he will be one dead President…. And he knows Fitz, “The General”, will do it himself. Man…. that was a gut bender…

Now go see your wife and daughter Fitz…

What… Fitz injected poisoned the President when he pricked his shoulder as he walked pass him…. Wow, that was slick… But will the President mention his conversation with Fitz to his Chief of Staff. Let’s hope not since it was more of a private matter an State & Country….

I definitely couldn’t blame her for being paranoid about eating the food with Fitz not being there… But I’m sure the Cook knows if he does anything stupid, that’s her/his life too…

Fitz is so crazy. I love his sense of humor…. Telling her the difference between her and Erin, but most of all, she orgasm like a Star…. (But he doesn’t know what Erin can do, does he. And if he wants to live, he never well… LMBO)…

Yeah, that heifer Abby doesn’t like Olivia and she’ll look for any reason to put Olivia in harm’s way… But Fitz is not liking their plan but Ms. Smarty pants go around Fitz and tell Olivia what’s up with Chalamet and how she could help them. And Fitz face is probably redder than Abby’s hair right about now.. Olivia wants to help only if Fitz agree. Which… currently, he’s not.

Smooth it out so you can go to Paris with him Olivia. Let Fitz know he’s not the only smooth operator in the family to get his way with a few kisses and some smooth talk.… Lol… ;-D))))))))))))))))))))))))))))).. And Abby can learn her own talking points with Chalamet, without her help if she can’t go to Paris with him….. Two really can play this game Fitz. Ummmmm, Looks like she may just get to go to Paris with him…. I hope this trip goes off without a hitch and things work out. And why do I feel like Abby will find some excuse or reason why she can’t do it so Olivia can… Ok, let me more on so I can find out will this work trip turn into romance or will it be a disaster and she wish she had gone home….

Thanks for this Chapter. I’m trying to focus so I can get to the sequel. I’m so anxious to get to the end of this one, which I have completely read before, so I can do my reviews properly for each Chapter… Thanks again for this one…

Ciao,
Ms. Lady C.
Olivia Delgado chapter 18 . 3/6
niet zege dat je wou olivia dood?
Olivia Delgado chapter 5 . 3/3
deze Fitz hou ik niet van hij is een bandido
CharlieTsAngel chapter 50 . 2/25
After a good night’s sleep of sexual tension relief for both Fitz and Olivia, she wakes up to see why Fitz didn’t want her to touch his face the previous night after he made love to her. Like he said, she would freak out and start crying. He doesn’t want to worry her no more than she already is every time he leaves them.

He understands Olivia. He’s trying to stay alive and get back to you and Lily for good… Right now mess is beyond his control ….

Fitz is trying to distract Olivia by apologizing for the bruise he left on her neck when he was in an euphoria thro during their “hot” moment last night… But Olivia isn’t going for it. She wants to know who and how he got his beautiful face bruised up. (At least he told her what I think is the partial truth what happened to his face. He’s trying not to alarm her of the “real” danger he’s in everyday he’s there at the Base.)

Olivia he’s right… The three of you need some family time… You know what you all signed up for. He can’t just leave because you don’t want him getting hurt…. Let the man, your man do what he’s gotta do and you just pray he stays safe…. Go ahead Fitz, put that loving on her and she’s putty in your hands…. Both of you need this before Lily wakes up. And no Olivia a little pain is not going to make him stop the foreplay and sexing your body. Not after waiting to get back in your arms and between your walls… When she asked him “How bad does it hurt?” and he said “Not enough to stop me.” I hollered… Go ahead Fitz, rock her world again… This time nice and slow… ;-D)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))), Yaaaaassss!

Girl…. And why did you turn off the music. You need something to camouflage all that moaning and groaning you’re going to doing so Lily won’t wake up. (LMBO)

Olivia got me hollering talking about how “she”, her Va-j-jae missed him and she only masturbated once or a few times…. Girl, I’m hollering…. Fitz couldn’t help but laugh at her too… Then he had to fess up that he sort of did it too. That right Olivia let your man know he knows how to please you and a little pleasurable pain is ok as long as he’s doing it….

Olivia girl, I’m not mad at you…. but I am hollering when you told Fitz if his “dick got cut off, then that’s different.” Girl, I’m rolling….. ;-D)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) Sorry, but nope, Fitz, you can’t lose the best part of you beside your heart…. Mr. Feel So Damn Good” has to stay in stack….

If Olivia had left the music on, I could imagine this playing in the background….. “Mr. Too Damn Good” by Gerald Levert…

I want to be your shoulder when you need one to cry on
Hmm-hmm yeah
I want to be your pillow when you need one to lie on, oh yeah
I want to be the spot light that shines on ya
Girl I want to write the girl is mine on ya, yes I am
I want to be your thought in your daydreams
I want to be your everything, your everything
(Mr. Too Damn Good To You)
I want to be everything you ever thought you wanted
(Mr. Too Damn Good To You)
Ever needed baby, yeah
Girl I want to shout about it
You want to tell the world about it
(Mr. Too Damn Good To You)
And can't nobody else believe me
You'll have everything you've needed, yeah, yeah
(Mr. Too Damn Good To You)
I'm gonna be so so good to you
(Mr. Too Damn Good To You)
I’m gonna do things that you thought I would never do
Mr. Too Damn Good to you…

Lawd… those two have me rolling…. Fitz telling Lily as she’s still sleeping through three rounds of them sexing each other that he would kiss her but he has Olivia’s va-j-ja all over his mouth…. Wooooooooooooooo, I’m hollering ;-D))))))))))))))))))))))). No need hitting him Olivia, you know he’s telling the truth. (LMBO)….. ;-D))))))))))))))))))

Fitz is such a good Dad to Lily…. His little Rosebud… The time he’s losing from see her grow is taking a toll on him. He’s missed so much in such a short time…. Fitz and Lily’s interactions with her bath and not wanting to get out was too cute… Yep, Daddy, she got you wrapped around her little finger just like Mommy does…

Fitz informs Olivia of all the security changes he’s making to the house… The hidden compartments…. Man, sounds like things make get a whole lot heavier before it gets better…

Olivia has found a beautiful spacious $50 million, (Yes, I said $50 Million) Apartment, Brownstone, Condo, whatever. She didn’t really say what type of dwelling it was, only what it entails. Fitz told her to look for one. She just said that it’s in New York and she wants him to see it because she wants to move back there now that she had a successful Fashion week and Fitz is not working there for now. And he tells her its fine, to buy it. He just wants to see her happy… What! Dude, she said it was $50 million dollars…. 8 bedrooms, 7 baths and 7k square feet with a Terrace. And his response was…. “Nothing is too much for you…..” (Okay, where is your cousin, because I hope he’s a clone of you and has just as much $$$$… And…. Oooo Yeah, I need to meet him, Lol, wink, wink…) He calls that “spending a little” and tells her to look for a Yacht while she’s at it… Can I go with you Olivia? I promise not to get in your way….

Fitz and Olivia has to be cautious talking in their own home or at the Compound. Fitz doesn’t trust the Deltas. Everything at the Compound is being recorded. (And since they do not like Olivia, he has every right to be cautious.)

You know Fitz never fails to through something in there that makes you laugh your butt off at him…. Telling Olivia she doesn’t like the arrangement they have with the length of time he’s away either cause she’s missing all that great “dick” and all…. (Well guess what Fitz…. I have to agree with her on that one…. I would miss it too….. I’m hollering….)

During their talk and him freeing his mind, he told her why he broke the wrist of a prostitute Harrison sent over to him while they were in Germany. She didn’t take “no for an answer even after seeing the ring on his finger… So when she grabbed his penis, the “dick” that only belongs to Olivia, well she had to know her actions were not appreciated. Now Olivia knows truly how much the Deltas really hate her… But she also knows, as much as they may hate her, her husband loves her and Lily twice as much. She knows Fitz will not do that to them. After pulling her to him, he kisses her and lets her know she’s the only woman he wants to make love to hours and hours….. (Oh yeah girl… )

Fitz, Lily and Zeus goes over to Lucky’s for a cookout while Olivia states home to plan a sexy evening for Fitz and work on a few things. She’s decided to sell her Penthouse and make an appointment for her and Fitz to see the $50 million home in NY she wants to purchase… Only now the Realtor, Timothy acts like he has amnesia. No problem, he wants to act brand new, that’s what she’ll give him. Two can play this game. Her Assistance can deal with his petty butt… (And when did $50 become $60? Does he think she can’t pay for it? Mmmmm, isn’t he in for a big surprise. She should negotiate it down to $45 million, all cash just to cut in his commission since he wants to dissemble their previous conversations.)

Woah, chucky, ducky….. Olivia has Fitz attention with her blue lingerie and wings…. Mmmmmm, Will she have him flying tonight…. And hopefully Lily sleeps “ALL” night long…. Cause I think Fitz will have those wings off her in no time… Lol… ;-D)))))))))))))))))))))))))…

Yes huni…. Once he saw her, I’m sure it was standing attention at high salute….. ;-D))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) LMBO!

No “balls deep”, Mmmmm, Olivia are you sure that’s going to happen when he has you moaning and trembling begging him “don’t stop, don’t ever stop!” I don’t think so….. Balls Deep Baby, all night… that’s what it going to be… (Smiling)

Oh freak, she stopped and now she has him begging “Don’t stop…” LMBO ;-D))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Fitz and Olivia enjoyed a night of euphoric bliss which included three good rounds…. This will have to last them a minute, he had to leave the next morning…

What the freak! Olivia is his next mission the President wants him to take care of…. Wow and what is that.

Ciao,
Ms. Lady C.
SarahWalka1814 chapter 54 . 2/9
OMG I FUCKING KNEW ITTTTTTT!
this was SO UNFAIR to do this to us lol but i had a feeling someone would use that mask to fake someone's identity! but fuck, AMNESIA?! didnt see that one coming! fuckkkkk even though this is a just a story and i knew there's a sequel, i still read this chapter (esp the funeral) with non stop tears
i still cant believe this!

PHENOMENAL JOB!
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