This is a really good transition chapter! I’m glad that we got news about Ella. It has been a while, since the last time she appeared in this story. Too bad Mike has to continue working as a servant for Noah. At least Vito helped out by doing chores that Mike couldn’t do at the time. Keep up the great content, and I’m excited for the new chapter!

Love it! Well now I know what's up with Ella. Can't wait for next chapter!

Loved it! Man I keep thinking Mal can't be dead he might come back oh well I'll just have to keep reading then.

I’m finally reviewing a chapter early for once. I’m glad that Ella will finally hear the news that Mike is still alive. Also, I was not expecting Vito to try to help out Mike. I think it’s awesome that Vito is more understanding of Mike’s injuries, compared to Noah and Scott. Keep up with the amazing writing and I can’t wait to read the next chapter!

Sorry for the late review! Poor Mike! I feel so bad for him. I wonder if Mike will have to face Noah again. I hope that Duncan and Zoey can help Mike out somehow. Keep up with the awesome work!

Great I wonder what will happen next!?

Love the suspense! I’m super excited to see what’s gonna happen! I’m predicting that Scott tagged along with Jo because the intruder said, “Multiple Mike”. Maybe Noah told Scott to follow Jo.
I’m so glad you still have the inspiration to continue this story. Thank you for writing these amazing chapters!

Oh cliff hanger! I wonder what will happen next? Can't wait!

I love how you put so much detail, especially for Mike’s perspective. It adds more life to the story and easier to imagine. I’m super excited for Duncan and Mike’s conversation!
I’m also curious about the conversation between Noah and Jo. I like how you made Jo a royal guard; I can totally see her as one, and love the reference how others see her as a guy, even though she’s a girl.
Keep up with the amazing work and I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Loved it! Keep up the great work. Can't wait for Duncan and Mike's conservation!

Hey again! Sorry I didn’t review the previous chapter. I just felt shy about it. I predict that Duncan saved Mike from another evil, who was also at the castle, according to Chapter 31. I also like that Duncan and Zoey are a couple in this story. I’m super excited to hear about Duncan’s side of the story in the next chapter.
I’m so glad that you continued to write this story. Thank you for making my day!

This was great! I hope Mal might come in the next chapter!

This was a good story I loved it, hopefully Mal will show up soon I hope!

I’m so happy you posted another chapter! There’s so much suspense! I just wonder who took Mike from the castle and why? Hope that’s figured out in the next few chapters!

Yay! I’m so glad I started reading this a week ago. I really hope Ella and Mike get together!