The slug and shit part omg
"i'll get over it" of course noll, of course

Haha, very cute and entertaining story! Love the slight Yasune at the end :) It would've been funny if there was a short bit at the end where Madoka and Lin find out about Maggie swearing :P Maybe that could be a short one-shot of that instead hahah

It was very funny and entertaining.

This was so cute! I love the fluff and the fact Gene's ulterior motive for marrying Yasu is adoption C: It's really nice to read about the Davis twins being happy

LOL, suddenly prompted Yasene XD
OMG THIS WAS ADORABLE! XD
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When Lin finds out about the swearing XD PLEASE! XD (rofl)