| Reviews for Be Careful of What You Wish For |
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   Mistletainn chapter 3 . 11/17/2019 Aww, I liked Lehrgen's POV (thanks to Youjo Konki). How unfortunate that the fic seems to be discontinued.. |
| Vladistad chapter 3 . 8/17/2019 About your ending line, I pretty much feel the same about trying to pass off as normal when in my mind I have crazy and unrealistic thoughts and stories. |
| 2xXR6 chapter 1 . 9/2/2018 Veri n1c3N8Hst0ri0W |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2018 I miss you! please come back! |
| Anon-kun chapter 3 . 11/8/2017 Author-san IIRC, by the 4th novel Visha was influenced by Degurechaff’s madness? To the point she is a demon on the battlefield. |
| Shinozuka Kou chapter 3 . 9/10/2017 Cool, an update! Also- haha! I knew it, I knew you were also Forlorn Story Teller! The writing styles are just too similar for it to be a coincidence. Glad I finally got confirmation. |
| Szept chapter 2 . 7/1/2017 It's an enjoyable enough read, but you make frequent enough errors that they can't be overlooked. Even the very last line of the second chapter contains an error: "Live was wonderful" ought to be "Life was wonderful" The difference is that the first refers to the process of living, and you're referring to a period of time. A lot of tense mistakes, as well. Personally, I believe there is only one way to learn this sort of stuff, though it takes time. Reading. A lot. And something written in proper English, too, so that you don't pick up bad habits. |
| goldenxman33 chapter 2 . 6/6/2017 That was great . I realy mess lerhgen Criticism for tanya , although you use alot of original text from manga and novel . keep up the good work . |
| Fire lord 626 chapter 2 . 5/19/2017 Yum, we need to talk |
| Fire lord 626 chapter 1 . 5/19/2017 This shows promise |
| Acerman chapter 2 . 4/30/2017 I'd love to see when he meets her before she heads to notRomania. I wonder what he was thinking (in the anime) when he advised her to learn notRomaninan. I know what it is in the manga, but it's the anime I'm curious about. |
| ilidio13 chapter 2 . 4/12/2017 Great Chapter and I fully agree with the contents of your Author's Note. The Anime just had to make a storyline to present Tanya as the Devil of the Rhine and to hook viewers in the process. I was not needed, IMO, but it was not the end of the world either. Anyway, I will will be waiting for the next chapter. Keep Going! |
| ilidio13 chapter 1 . 4/11/2017 Interesting war journal-like story. Keep going! |
| Yona0 chapter 1 . 4/8/2017 What?! She (he?) was almost nice to him in the manga? Whoa...I gotta find that. Thanks for the information and providing me with my first Youjo Senki fic. Like it already, Lehrgen was always so funny to watch when he told everyone she was a devil and no one listened... |
| Yona0 chapter 1 . 4/8/2017 What?! She (he?) was almost nice to him in the manga? Whoa...I gotta find that. Thanks for the information and providing me with my first Youjo Senki fic. Like it already, Lehrgen was always so funny to watch when he told everyone she was a devil and no one listened... |
