actual has Kasumi before they announced her for Royal nice

Hey, I noticed this hasn’t been updated in a while. If there’s something that’s bothering you out there in the real world, whether from personal issues to writer’s block, I understand. Do what you have to do. Writers have lives too, and sometimes, even they need to take a break. You’ve done really good work here, so if you need to take a break every so often, that’s totalky fine.

Please make more I love this story

I’m actually surprised about this fanfic! It’s definitely interesting. I always expect that these kinds of stories would always have that “OC” character. I mean, there are some similar things about your character and the “Mary Sue”. But, the backstory and her character fits very well. She has been on the Metaverse for five years, so it makes sense that she has the experience of fighting off the shadows without making it look like she’s overpowered. Loving the story! I really hope that you make more of this! It’s worth my spare time.

You have got to update this! This is the work of pure genius! More! I demand more at once!
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Kasumi is the tits. That one comment she made about living in a country that expects the women to "silent and pretty" resonates pretty well, it's true after all. I couldn't stand that, and it's why I adore Kasumi. She's such a fiery, savvy hothead and she's not one to be trifled with. Also that Akira is the one falling for who first is nice, usually the oc falls first. Nice change of pace, I think it's cute. He has his work cut out for him though, what with her not letting looks rule her decisions on people. She's very real haha

This story is progressing so smoothly; I admire your flow. I identify strongly with your OC. So far she is incredibly dimensional- can't wait to learn more about her.

I have stars in my eyes- I adore your main character. I'm glad I still have so much more to read still! Thanks for your hard work

awwww so cute.

Absolutely love it~! Can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you post it soon.

Awwwwwwww, he's so cute with his crushing!

I can't wait for them to get together!

I need more this is the best

Nice to see another chapter, especially with how Reaper deals with her handicap. Also, Morgan's needs to know better than messing with someone's medicine!

Good story! I can't wait as how those four trick Kasumi/Hitomi. Keep it up!

Man, Kasumi's as stubborn as a mule! Will she eventually come to rely on the team more and accept their friendship and support?