Reviews for Tear In My Heart
ahyde17 chapter 1 . 3/11
Naked Kakashi in a shower. What a wonderful mental image. Great story! You captured them both so well. Deserves more reviews. Hope to read more from you in the future!
50blades chapter 1 . 12/23/2018
This story was so sexy. I cannot forgive Tsunade for interrupting the shower scene. Kakashi calling Sakura babygirl. HOT in herre...
Green Alba chapter 1 . 7/29/2017
Really liked it, the bathroom scene is hilarious. I was a bit unsettled at the beginning with the inner thoughts addressing the reader, but it got better and better, as the POV turned out to be quite deep and believable. The way you describe their relationship evolution over time was another good point of the story.
shiitakehero chapter 1 . 6/14/2017
This was so fun and sweet and dirty! Loved it
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2017
First person pov works very well in your story! The alternating views also kept the ball rolling (more like speeding) in terms of anticipation.

Oh, I really liked this!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2017
This story is just woahhhhh. It's just romantic and hot at the same time. Hope you make more about these two. Keep it up!
Lindt Luirae chapter 1 . 4/9/2017
That was awesome!
fineillsignup chapter 1 . 4/8/2017
Wonderful! I loved the alternating first person POV.
mbravesgirl7 chapter 1 . 4/6/2017
The first part where Sakura is trying to describe Kakashi is hilariousAlso both POVs was a good choiceit took me a few paragraphs in to realize it was Kakashi, but hey, still good choice! T was great and didn't seemed rushed. I look forward to more of this pair if you write it!