Reviews for Return |
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AverageJoe123 chapter 1 . 4/24/2017 And then Henry arrives and saves the day. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2017 Hello,nice story! I L0V3 IT! |
Quasar Blue chapter 1 . 4/6/2017 Oh. My. God. I can't believe a creator would shamelessly kill of one of his own creations... I may not know enough of this game, but I can already tell it's dark as all get out. I feel bad for Bendy and Boris... D: |
KuriMaster13 chapter 1 . 4/6/2017 Don't know this game, but the one shot is interesting. |
CRYSTALFANG chapter 1 . 4/5/2017 This is great! Incredible, actually - and I hate the fact that someone as smart as me - "fly by the seat" (however that saying goes) author did not think of something like...THAT. Especially considering on how well you easily show Bendy's insanity in a way that makes sense. And it's not a bad fan theory about why Bendy might be trying to kill Henry, I saw the teaser trailer for Chapter Two, and it wouldn't surprise me in the slightest if this was the case: Bendy is insane...nothing to explain. Hey that ryhmes! What are the fucking odds?! Anyways, I hope you make another one-shot! Perhaps in Boris's POV? This was a really good POV! Which is saying something since I've read a lot of fics with POVs and they just felt...awkward. Welp, can't wait to see more of what you have to offer! Peace out! |
aqua9597 chapter 1 . 4/5/2017 Wow I feel bad for Bendy :( but yeah this is a bit dark but it is good! :) Keep going with your stories and I'm here to support you! :3 |
Donjusticia chapter 1 . 4/5/2017 "They have sent you a letter, to come back home to play But to your dismay, this isn't your day, For the happy fun times have begun to fade Watch as we reanimate our corpses you abandoned. We're dismantled, we're mishandled But we won't be skipped and swayed! Trapped within these walls, you left our souls to drop away The ink decays, the walls at bay But the reckoning has come today you say Boris has no guts because you replaced it with mechanical strain We've been tortured, but we move forward This disorder kills your daaaay! Hey! I am alive! Immortalized You're the creator! You traitor! Hey! There's no vaccine To cure our dirty needs For now you must! BUILD UP OUR MACHINE, YOU DIE TONIGHT!" -Dagames "Bendy and the Ink Machine" Very interesting one-shot, and a great take on Bendy's character and motivation. I think you and I need to make a support group for tormented souls trapped within decaying/unnatural bodies. We'll call it...Animatronics Anonymous! Meeting 1 of Animatronics Anonymous Facilitator Foxy: Hello, I be Facilitator Foxy! Y'all have probably come here for the same reason I did. To come up with some way to overcome our informal obsession with killing people after jump scaring them! But since we y'all haven't figured out how, we'll be spending most of our time sharing how our weeks went. Freddy will start and everybody will listen. And remember our motto... Freddy, Chica, Bonnie, Bendy, and Borris: What is shared in these meetings remains on the fan fiction universe. Foxy: Yar! That be right! Now take it away, Freddy! Freddy: Hello, I'm Freddy... Foxy, Bonnie, Chica, Bendy, and Borris: Hello Freddy Freddy: I had a pretty ok week...I mean...I'm kind of bummed that there's no FNAF 4, but uh...you know...good things have got to end and...well...now that I don't work in that pizza place anymore, I can more easily overcome my addiction of stuffing people into animatronic suits. Facilitator Foxy: Thank you for sharing, Bendy? Bendy: Hello, I'm Bendy... Foxy, Freddy, Bonnie, Chica, and Borris: Hello Bendy! Bendy: It's been 3 days since I've killed my last animator. On my honor, I had him crushed by an ink roller. Foxy: ... ... ... You're an inspiration to all of us mate! Freddy: Good on you! Looking forward to more wonderful stories from you. |
VinnyBean chapter 1 . 4/5/2017 This is quite good. It shows some true reasoning as to why Bendy is trying to kill Henry in the first chapter. I like it. Great work! Here, virtual hug-of-accompishment-and-proudness . . . d-([ )-b |
4fireking chapter 1 . 4/5/2017 Glad I could read this story of yours. |
Leafeon12 chapter 1 . 4/5/2017 Nice one-shot! :D Wait until your next one-shot! XD |
Ulrich362 chapter 1 . 4/5/2017 Wow, poor Bendy. Everyone who might have been able to help him left and his clearly insane creator not only lied to him about what happened to Boris but fled leaving him to suffer for the rest of his life, however long that may end up being. It's impossible not to feel bad for him. Amazing work. |
Ice580 chapter 1 . 4/5/2017 This is amazing... Your writing is beautiful. I hope to see more of your works. |
GXAL chapter 1 . 4/5/2017 Poor Bendy. :( It is really sad to see him like this. He is like a little child who completely turned into a psychopath with vengeance. I don't blame him for hating the creator. |
Argonian Dovahkiin chapter 1 . 4/5/2017 Man, this story really punches you in the feels. I loved those little moments dialogue. That really drove the point home |