Thank you for reading my fanfic!

So far your first chapter is really interesting! I would read this after I'm done with my new chapter :D

I read this story a little while ago. But didn’t leave a review... imma do that now lol. PLZ continue this. I’m in needs of more chaps!

It's nice, I hope you will continue this. Keep up the good work!

Please, continue! I really enjoyed it so far!

While I'm liking this,it feels like nothing really happened in this chapter, which is disappointing.

I love.

Guauu que capítulo tan triste espero que pronto sakura se acerque a naruto.

Me encanta estan lindo y tierno.

very good, really excited to see this continue.

You might want to have another look at the wording of the summary - the “hate’s competitor...” sentence doesn’t really make sense.

I've been looking for this premise for a while, and since your grammar and spelling is in good shape, you've got a reader in me. I do want to say the sentence structure is a little flowery, which makes it hard to follow sometimes. Naturally you can't just write what happens exactly, since that'd be a rather dull read. Try to strike a balance.

All that said, you're doing a great job, keep up the good work.

Glad to see you’re back. This concept is one of my favorites because the ripple effects. Would Hinata still like Naruto? How would the dynamic of Team 7 differ because Sakura has different feelings towards Naruto? It’s interesting to see what’s different and what’s the same. On another note, young Sakura and Naruto are so cute! Their situations make me sympathetic towards them. I would dislike Sakura’s parents if it weren’t for their love for Sakura that drove them to push away Sakura from Naruto. It is understandable from their perspective.

I totally forgot is story existed. Still... I WANT MORE! It's nice, well written, and awesome.

interesting

She could conflicted between Sasuke and Naruto .Hell give her inner voice or Id provide very naught Fantasies thoughts evolving both of the Boys .Do this her not being as Abussive of Naruto and like to support Sasuke .Hell may do different action Sasuke see as her not as Useless Fangirl .Even having possible two Rivalries one Ino For Sasuke and Hinata for Naruto .have More interaction between er and Naruto and Sasuke .Make even hard for there is her Love Sasuke nd Way conflict with Love for Naruto .maybe even some Rivalry between Sasuke and Naruto bit over her .It have some interest Character interaction and Development .Hell going into Sasuke eventual relationship and marriage to Sakura and Naruto to Hinata .this Prove more in-depth Character development and such explore problem of Divide heart between two loves .