Reviews for Unrequited
elh4587 chapter 14 . 7/31
Wait what? How did that bitch Lily not tell severus what happened at lunch. It wouldn't have been that hard to confirm that he didn't know the truth still 15 years later...
elh4587 chapter 7 . 7/30
I mean... Tbh she could just TELL stupid ass slughorn she doesn't want to work with Lily. Period, and she wants severus to tutor her. If that moron insists, just don't go to the stupid tutoring.
Lee-All-The-Way chapter 47 . 7/14
I cant tell you how in love with this story I am! It's truly a work of art and I ate the whole thing up in just a few days. I was so excited when I saw an update was posted too! cant wait to read more!
KevlarKitten chapter 43 . 3/24
What an amazing story. I'm really starting to love Snape stories. Everyone deserves redemption, love, and some sex.
Zora Silver chapter 43 . 3/21
Hey! Welcome back!
I missed this story so much!
I'm so happy you are continuing it!
ElianaSawadaVongolaMadonna chapter 5 . 3/29/2019
Lo sabia!
Es Lily!
XD
ElianaSawadaVongolaMadonna chapter 1 . 3/29/2019
"Mi amor por Timmy arde con la intensidad de miles de soles"
XD Entendi la referencia...
Son of the Mourning chapter 41 . 7/30/2018
love the update!
Son of the Mourning chapter 40 . 4/28/2018
I wonder if sev is going to find out about Sirius licking her face lol
Ventari SylverFox chapter 38 . 2/25/2018
I have simply devoured your story over this past week. I have been really down recently and this has just been the most decadent distraction.
You do plan on finishing this, I hope!
Your writing is polished and well thought, the OC relatable without tipping into Mary Sue, and while this is obviously not Canon (I will be devastated if it circles back around to be that way), the divergence does not takeaway from the purpose of the original work.
I am a little disappointed that she did not meet Sirius again (unless you plan to change that) and that she is not in The Order yet (Poor Severus and his well intentioned plans), but you are pulling off an amazing yarn. One that I just cannot get enough of!
Hope to see more soon!
csravenclaw chapter 38 . 2/20/2018
Ooohhh an update! I just really love this story! Thanks for the update! Can’t wait for more!
RedKitsune2016 chapter 37 . 1/27/2018
I love this story! El is a hoot! Cracks me up. Thanks for writing this. I immensely enjoy the dialog.
csravenclaw chapter 37 . 1/16/2018
Thank you for an update! This is honestly the best HP fic I’ve read and I cannot wait to read more updates! I loooove how Dumbledore infuriates Sev in a cutest way here lol
btlmotormouth chapter 37 . 1/15/2018
I absolutely love this story and can't wait for more!
badwolffor3ver chapter 37 . 1/13/2018
Omg I absolutely love this!
been reading it all morning and haven't been able to put it down. they are so fucking adorable. would be interesting to see how El and severus reacts to El meeting Sirius again.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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