oh scrap ultra magnus just pissed off Lucy, that's either a good thing, or a bad one depending on the situation but, one thing i do know is hell hath no fury like a women scorned.

Ultra Magnus has issues. I just know it.

Hey, once again GREAT WORK OF ART! And that's fine I don't mind a little bit of suspense. But I can't wait for the next chapter! Please don't keep me waiting for it for to long! I'm VERY excited to find out what happens next. Oh and that part where Lucy puts Ultra Magnus in his place... HILLAIRIOUS AND SUPER COOL! I did NOT see that one coming!

Hey, I forgot to ask in my previous review. WHEN WILL Ratchet TELL Lucy THAT HE LOVES HER!? I have an idea for HOW he can tell her. That is if you're taken ideas. Here's my idea he takes her to a place in the park AT NIGHT with a full moon, once they get there after a moment of star gazing he turns to her while saying "Lucy I have something I have to tell you." "But I'm to nervous to say it, so I'm going to have to show you." Then Lucy says "Well then show me." And he slowly takes his arms and wraps them around her and pulls her close and then gets gently kisses her.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMG! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOO CUTE! Keep on going I REALLY WANT TO SEE MORE OF THIS UP AND SOON! I REALLY loved the part at the end when Ratchet said "I'd like to hear you sing more often." That was completely unexpected I did NOT see that one coming!

Ben dis donc

whoa nice chapter mate.

WOAH, WOAH, WOAH, WOAH! That like all the other chapters was GREAT! But the ENDING was the BIGGEST SHOCKER THAT MOST CERTAINLY DIDN'T SEE COMING! So please update again and sooner because I REALLY WANT TO SEE MORE OF THIS UP SOON!

WOW!once again GREAT WORK! KEEP ON GOING WITH AWESOME STORY! I REALLY WANT TO SEE MORE OF THIS UP SOON!

wow my heart goes out to her, she lost her true mate, and now she is missing here other half, i know what that is like, roughly two years ago, on august 10th, 2018 i lost my grandfather to a heart disease, it broke my heart because he was the closest thing i had to a father, as my bastard man-child of a sex-offender is currently in prison, for his crimes and serving time.
i hold no sympathy for the jerk, he did the crime, now he is doing the time.

didn't see that one coming

Hey, thanks for answering my question. So I guess that means she'll fall in love with Ratchet then. Oh and just so you know I'm an guest reader. And Stephanie Phelps is my real name. And this chapter like all your other chapters is a WORK OF ART! Oh but will the autobots be able to rescue Lucy now that she is with the decepticons, that is once they see her? That's a big question that I now REALLY WANT THE ANSWER TO!

Oh I forgot to ask in my last review. WHO WILL Lucy FALL IN LOVE WITH Ratchet OR Optimus? That's what I REALLY want to know!

poor Lucy ️

WOAH! THAT WAS WAAAAAAY UNEXPECTED! I did NOT see any of that coming! Just WOW! Keep on going with this GREAT story I REALLY want to see more of this updated soon!