(I don't like doing these...): Just to be Clear, if you make up a Destiny and warhammer 40K crossover Fanfic, make sure the Forces and powers of Destiny and that of the Guardians and Humanity have an even chance against w40k. Especially with Lore capabilities and Not just gameplay. [ Tries To Clarify ]

[ They're ] not the most 'powerful' when it comes on dealing with those Fanatical galactic crusaders (no offense Astartes-players here), but try focusing us, our allies, and our enemies being able to stand chances against w40k, yes? [ Tense Chuckling ]

Just a thought...

Rest easy Guardian Slim, for your plite is understood, and my first story of yours I have seen through. But this is no end, for the start of a new. This is quite sad indeed. In the words of a great Gunslinger "This was the best bet I ever... lose" (not so much the context, more the energy)

P.S.: I kind of want a Guardian Slim Stan Lee level cameo in "Son of Fire"

[ THEN THIS story SHALL BE DECLARED: [ DEAD ] ]

[ END OF A story... ] [ Sighing In Empty Disappointment At Such A Collapsed event ]

[ As For The That Dragon Abomination... ]

[ For A continual story: KILL IT. BURN IT WITH THE LIGHT ] [ Calmed Tone ]

Be Brave...

And Have Faith in HIM... [ Transmatting Towards Another story ]

#1 saddest anime endings of all time.

This is also a great story can't wait for the next update.

despite all the messed up sentences I guess this is an okay story.

great

Finally, it's about time we get this story again (not that I don't like "Son of Fire" I just started with this one). Also the "in-game" guardian would have freed the Traveler, avenged Cayde, AND killed Riven by the time this chapter dropped... just saying XD. Keep up the work.

P.S. I would want to see a flaming toaster w/ a mouth that shoots heat-seeking lava (aka: Truth fusion, aka: Jotunn)

Just because in Destiny it is called 'Light', doesn't mean that its like 'Holy Light' and such things in Heaven.

One of the Closest would be that of Solar Light and even Arc Light if the Angels of HSDXD would used the Paracausal powers of the Sky...

Void Light...hmmm...I don't know how the Holy Angels would be able to use them, if they see a power that is like 'Darkness' yet the Void is also just another type of Light.

(Review To Chapter 18): Slim (here, not you author) is a Fool...[Shakes Head At This Stupidity]

Why? You're a Guardian aren't you?...

[Activates Sunbreakers' Burning Maul, Alongside Other Guardians activating their Own Supers, Each one among have equipped all of the Supers, While surrounding the author for...Update-Lessons]

You'll Ghost just revives you, No Harm On This Right!?~ [Smiling Threateningly]

so they don't have their powers?

Why the does he keep losing its sucks and brings the mood down seriously cant he do anything on his own!?

This triggers me a little, because all that guardians need to come back to life are their ghosts, their light, and their body, and the ghost can transmit the body away from any fighting when they go to revive them.

It would be cool of you gave him some legendary weapons *cough*lastword/touchofmalice*cough* or like iron lord/dlc stuff cuz those are cool