Reviews for Psychosis
Michael chapter 11 . 9/20
I really hope this story isn't dead, I've just found it and I've gotten to last chapter. I'm really enjoying it so far, it's one of the few gore FO:NV X undertale crossovers. I hope that you're doing well too, because at a time like this you need to *stay determined!*
Shadow Amongst Shadows chapter 11 . 7/30
I like the cut of your jib. Not usually into first person stories but this was good. Even if you don't update it ever again this was a fun read. So thanks for putting something interesting on the internet.
Djpj0322 chapter 11 . 7/19
I absolutely adore this story as well as your other works too, your writing style is just so good.
This story and a few other ones inspired me to take up writing as well and I can only hope that I can get as good as you
Guest chapter 2 . 12/8/2019
whyyyyyyyy
The Mine Flayer chapter 11 . 11/8/2019
Well, I just binged the entire series, and I have to say that this is the one of the best fics I’ve read on this site, I hope you update soon, and I’ll leave a review on the next chapter.
0rigami chapter 11 . 10/16/2019
This is a well-written story, a small gem. Unappreciated, if i have to judge by the number of reviews, but that is the destiny of crossovers. Keep going though, this story deserves to be written.
The King Saul chapter 9 . 8/14/2019
"This it chief."
"I know that..."
"So this is how it ends right... A sad ending but at the very least this a ending."
"There are more chapters-"
"I SAID THIS IT."
Jay chapter 11 . 5/16/2019
I actually know exactly what you mean. That bug has been in the system since 2014.

I enjoyed the read and, should you add more, I'll gladly read it again.

Let us know if you ever go pro with your writing.
Freaky20 chapter 11 . 4/16/2019
You still there? Hope your getting better. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Jan chapter 11 . 3/16/2019
So, I hope you read this

At first I was upset, then, I thought.

He’s changing, so on this run... he’ll be the pacifist

Please continue this, after the beginning I NEED this

I understand if you’ve lost inspiration
Hey, you write better than I ever could

I struggle with making characters and personalities
All I am able to write is crack fiction. Not a thing I’d like
I’ve written only one fanfiction I’ll house all my faith in
A bendy and the ink machine
The first good thing I wrote

I don’t trust myself with it
I might just... destroy it
Unhappy with it later on
But please, won’t you publish it?
Take credit for it if you wish

... contact this email, state who you are and I’ll
Send you a PDF of the typed up documents
If you want to give me credit
Simply credit it to “Foriest Jan Smith”
DieselBusters chapter 11 . 2/25/2019
Another great chapter in an already amazing fic. I like where the story's going and I can't wait for more.
Guest chapter 11 . 2/21/2019
HEARTH ACHE BY THE NUMBER, TROUBLES BY THE SCORE, EVERYDAY YOU LOVE ME LESS EACH DAY I LOVE YOU MORE
Guest chapter 7 . 1/16/2019
I liked the disbelief papyrus thing in the 7th chapter
Janus chapter 11 . 12/25/2018
Well, this was certainly a thing. Read it in one go, liked it quite a lot. Almost had me crying a few times, especially the scene with papyrus in the hall. Looking forward to more in the Future.
Crow T R0bot chapter 11 . 12/17/2018
Well, The Courier seems to have gotten off on the wrong foot with Frisk. Hopefully Napstablook doesn't hold the bullet against him later, but he seems too depressed and self-loathing to take it personally.

Frisk seems quick enough to forgive at least. It's cute that Toriel thinks they're siblings. Hopefully that encourages The Courier to act more like one in the future. If anyone can help The Courier overcome his darker impulses, it's her.

It was actually kind of uncomfortable how quick The Courier was to dismiss Arcade from his life just like that, let alone the fact that he made Arcade that uncomfortable in the first place. Makes you wonder just what changed in The Courier to turn him from hero to monster like that over the space of the last few weeks. Was it just happenstance that he stopped by to help people or some other psychological pressure that turned him into...well...THIS? Did he alienate his other companions similarly?

Seems Flowey's up to his old tricks again. I wonder if The Courier's lessons will stick, but ironically enough, they can't if he wants to get the Golden Ending...holy crap, what if Flowey gets his soul on top of the other six human souls. Eep!
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