I love it Dexter was a total dick but Brick is sweet

I absolutely love your story! I really liked how Brick is cute but hot at the same time. Also, Brick as a doctor..* dreamy eyes*…
( Even though he is not a doctor yet, I can imagine.)

Positively awesome, I love the way you kept shifting between the two timelines, the plot promises everything with so little. Just wow, truly great work.

After finishing reading this story I desperately wanted more. I felt after that ending there could've been more but that's just me being greedy. Great story and I hope to read more like this I'm the future

HOLY CRAP STRANIQUE! WHERE DID THIS COME FROM?

GOD I'M SO HAPPY I CHECKED YOUR PROFILE BECAUSE GOOOOODDD LOOOOOORD THIS WAS HOOOOT!
I GOT SO EXCITED WHEN I READ THE TITLE BECAUSE PONY BY GINUWINE HAS TO BE A GUILTY PLEASURE OF MINE SO 11/10 FOR YOU GIRL. (Also Magic Mike is one of my personal favorites XD)

But damn you told me that this was coming out and I missed it! I'm so sorry! But hey, better late then never right? Anyways, here we go:

THIS WAS SO WELL WRITTEN AND CLEVER. GIRL YOU HAVE A GIFT, PLEASE DON'T STOP ANYTIME SOON ALRIGHT? THIS JUST LIKE ALL OF YOU'RE OTHERS WAS A PLEASURE TO READ. I WISH HAD YOUR MAD TALENT.

Dexter is an ass and Bloss deserves waaaay better - thankfully Brick does provide! Girls night out indeed, and holy god the Rowdies are so freaking hot dancing! Is it bad that I drooled slightly? Because holy shit (and yes I sound like Buttercup here) But those boys can dance their asses off. I could see it perfectly, and loooorrrdddyyyy.

Mike and Robin were simply adorable in this, oh my goodness - I want to meet a cute bartender like Mike! The chemistry between him and Robin was simply fantastic and I could not get enough of it! and don't even get me started on when Boomer picked Bubbles to be his dance partner, eeee I could feel her excitement from here!

and oh Buttercup, getting jealous because you couldn't ride Butch like a pony - don't you worry, I'm sure they'll be time for that later... XD

BUT WAY TO GO BLOSSOM - SWOOP IN AND SAVE BRICK FROM THE PSYCHO, honest to god, who does that to their employees? Princess apparently, ugh I wanted to slap her, but thankfully Blossom saved me the trouble - and dayyyymm girl, hit her with the catty phrases and shut her down, ouch, Princess better go put some ice on that and take it to the burn factory, because you can't recover from something like that.

Clearly, I enjoyed that far too much. XD

AND THEN THEY ALL WENT TO THE CLUB TOGETHER AND I GOT SO DAMN EXCITED, BECAUSE IT WASN'T POINTLESS GRINDING, IT WAS A DEEP AND INTIMATE MOMENT YOU MADE ALL FOUR COUPLES SHARE AND IT WAS FLAWLESS.

I loved the reasoning behind each of the subjects they were going to school for. (they boys and their backstory, oh my god I sobbed) I can totally see each of them doing their chosen fields, especially the Reds oh my goodness. (Though the blues though, ohhh my god yes Music and business for sure)

and god I can see Butch being so good at trades, he would definitely excel at them, as he gets to be hands on (though something tells me that he's going to be a lot more 'handsy' with BC after that night at the club. HUR HUUUR ;) Naughty, naughty, I definitely see BC being the kind of girl who dances provocatively.
Poor Butch doesn't have a chance in hell XD (Especially not after seeing the way she can move her hips. I think it's safe to say that she one that dance competition.)

and that ending though - morning afters are never usually a good thing but with Brick they are a true treat. It was just a really, relaxed yet intimate moment between the two of them, and I love how Brick isn't pushy, like "we fucked, let's get into a relationship" he's leaving it up for her to decide, though something tells me that something will come of it soon enough. ;)
and Blossom is just so cute when she's nervous, and gah their adorable together in this AU.

all and all. Holy shit, well done. This ranks as one of my top 5 favorite AU's now, thank you very much! this was just perfection!
I'm wondering if you're thinking of expanding on this AU in anyway, because lord knows I'd love to see more!

Fantastic job again lovely, and damn you can write one hell of a story!

much love
Rose xoxoxox

I am in love with this story, and the fact that each character sounds and act like they would in real life. Please update soon! Great work so far, can't wait. Update soon!

Lol I kno this is just a one shot but I'm kinda hoping for a sequel cuz it's amazing.

I really loved this story! Blossick is my all time favorite ship & I hope you'll make more stories like this in the future! Until next time.
~Ash141

Ohhhh my- ( so I finally got around to reviewing this - oye ve XD ) and is it heating up in here or is it just me: so I'm going to assume their night out dancing went VERY well indeed but now awkward morning(s) after time? Well that's never fun.

Ugggggh what an asshole! Leading TWO girls on and breaking little Blossy's heart like that! OOOOH I HOPE HE GETS A RUDE AWAKENING SOON! Did the other girl KNOW about Blossom?! Well she should learn if she doesn't- I nominate Buttercup for the honor of castrating him but if Blossom and mystery chick decide to join forces well then that's fine too XD

Speaking of Buttercup and the other ladies oh I adore your portrayal here- they're all hilarious : of course Bubbles would be the one to " appreciate" the beauty as an " artist" of couuuuurse she would- ( I was giggling like mad st that part won't lie) and Robin just so transparent - oh she has a great view from the bar of course she dies ;D

YOUR ROBIKE FEELS MADE ME SO HAPPY THEYRE SO CUTE AND I LOVE IT! ALL YOUR COUPLES ARE JUST SO CUTE!

But then along comes... Princess... one word UGH. Crazy witch tearing at poor Brick's clothes like some kind of animal like he's her " property" even uggggh what a vile specimen of a human being - good on Blossom for putting a stop to it when she didd! poor Butch and Boomer must have felt so helpless :(

But speaking of the Reds oh... my... God... is it getting HOT in here or WHAT ( Pun DEFINITELY intended) -you can already feel the tension in the air in their brief interactions already - was this really the first time they met though I just have a feeling Brick may have fixed on her for a reason... admiration from afar in their college courses maybe- or maybe he knows the other chick who knows only you do xD I'm just throwing wild theories out. There because I loved this so much and I needed time to properly gather my thoughts because there's so much more I could say but we'd be here forever so I will simply spare you any more fangirling XD

I simply can't wait for the conclusion to this - for all the colors and maybe Robike too to come to a happy conclusion... I hope... XD

Best of luck on all your writing adventures my friend!

Cheers,
Carrie

I like this story I was so into it I didn't realize I was on the first and only chapter :' -( please update I must see more lol :-)) keep it up tho

Please continoue. Im interested in how it goes. :D

This is soo good! I can't wait until part 2! Until then.
~Ash141

Love it

I am actually in love with this story! Please please please continue! This is so fucking amazing! Keep up the good work!