Nice. Always liked the Finnceline ship. I also really liked the Finn x Huntress ship.

This was so sad and it had so many mixed feeling. Thank you for writing such a lovely report .

It's beautiful.. _ damn.. i almost cried when the read the ending... you really are a talented Writer.. as always.. the detail you wrote in telling the story was astounding... even though i don't know the tune of the song Finn Sang i can still feel his sadness.. anguish.. and grief.. all the emotions were real and fantasy at the same time... if i told this to my son/daughter i'm sure they would be asleep before it even ended.. :D lol.. it's that long... amazing work..

I'm curious on what happened to jake the dog though... cause it was not clear on if he either died or not..

All that aside.. top notch story telling and writing...
Looking forward to reading more from you...

- DK

Aww this is really cute. That ending really pulled at my heart strings

Nice. Good drama. And the song was excellent.