Nice job, friend! You did amazingly with this chapter! It's obvious that you put a lot of heart and hard work into this! It paid off! Your attention to detail was wonderful and I adore how you've set everything up. I am so looking forward to reading more! Good luck on the writing!

Great start to your chapter! You hit the ground running with the action, super strong way to open the chapter. Honestly keep opening all of your chapters with a hook and you'll do great! I enjoyed it very much. I see you accidentally called Gerard Argent Gerald. One word of advice, you start a lot of your paragraphs with 'She' I would find other words for She ( Grace, the huntress, the teenage girl) or perhaps you can start your paragraphs differently.
For example you wrote: She shakily reached out and wiped the stained blade against her sleeve.
you can try: Blood had stained the steel blade, Grace attempted to clean it against her sleeve, remove any evidence of death 'etc'. Your writing is super strong though, and I can't wait to see where this story will go :]

Just in this little tid bit I LOVE Grace! She's so great, and you've done an amazing job with writing in this first chapter! It's such a captivating narrative. Grammar is great as well. Overall excellent! I can't wait to read whatever you post next!

xoxo
-bg