Love this fic and I hope you pick it back up someday soon.

Can you separate the book thing at the end from the rest of the story and separate the end note from it too? It would make it flow better and know when the chapter ends

this is good.

it's a well thought out timeline and a great introduction to the story. you've clearly put quite a bit of thought into this fic, I'm looking forward to the rest!

The story you have so is has great depth and entertainment value. I would recommend a bit more proofreading to take care of some of your little mistakes with grammar and punctuation.

Having Naruto be a bit more experienced than his former classmates is a brilliant idea. His development as a ninja is progressing smoothly. The major issue that I have is that he seems to act way too grown up for his age at points in every chapter. On top of that, the lack of interaction between him and his fellow generation is a little bit of a let down.

Are you planning on making him a Jonin and thus giving him his own team by the time we get to the canon timeline? If you do who is going to be on that team? Izumi (your OC)? If you don't is he going to still be working with a genin team such as Kakashi as some form of test to become a Jonin?

Regarding the training Naruto has with Gai: Will there be a point where Naruto will train with weights like Lee and Gai due in canon (beyond the ones he uses for his stamina training)?

thanks for the update. i took your advice on the re-read

Been awhile since I've read this fic, and it's just as good as I remember (if not slightly better).

Keep up the great work, and I hope that you have a great New Year!

muito bom, quero mais

How good Will naruto be at water manipulation?
I really like this story.

Omg u r so cliche

I really like the direction of this story. Having mostly original teams for an early graduate Naruto gives a lot of ground for the author's creativity and character development. I find myself liking Team Hayate more than I thought I would. The pacing is also something that I appreciate when having read this, while you didn't go disgustingly crazy on the timeskips, I like a story that actually feels like it's come a long way since Chapter 1 when we're at least 50k words in.

It also helps how I've always thought that water ninjutsu is really cool. As for the small changes you've made lore-wise, I'm all for them: No plot-holes regarding shadow clone training and overall continuity in the timeline. However, I'd like to get to know more about the Uchiha OC soon, perhaps you have plenty of her appearances planned in the future. I'm also really curious as to how Sasuke will behave in this story, where once he graduates from the academy, it's likely that Naruto would be nearing Jonin levels of development.

what's up with chapter one?

The first chapter isn't here...I also see reviews for chapter 7 but there isn't a chapter 7...did you edit those out?

The first chapter has disappeared.

nice chapter thx for writing it