Love it
Hope you plan to continue it

I hope you come back to this I would like to see where it goes

Bruh don't leave us hanging

Loved the pov change but was a little Disappointed that it meant there wasn’t anything beyond that like her reaction to seeing oh he’s an adult wish you had kept writing this it’s awesome I would’ve loved to see where you went with this.

I will look forward to the next chapter!

Hello!

I’m absolutely in love with this story. I love the way you portrait a female Harry. She seems very feminine and soft compared to how most people write a post-war version of her, and I really, really love it! It is very interesting how she is able to literally see the curse (maybe an ability left from the hallows?).

The two chapters in Fon’s POV were really nice to read. I really love Fon as a character even though there is less known about him than Reborn, I think you did a great job with his personality and reactions on Harriel.

I especially loved to read how they saw/thought about the other. It is obvious that because of the different societies they belong to, they both focus on a different thing. It makes me wonder how they will take the fact that a different secret community exist and if they might actually know about it.

I absolutely adore the way you write. It sucks the reader into the story and makes me wish there is infinite more to read.

It has been a while since the story has been updated, but I really hope you are doing okay out there. So please stay save and I hope to read more whenever you have the time to write and update!

Oh gosh rip Hariel and I definitely want to see more chapters after seeing this

Hehe I'm sure if it was reborn he'd immediately bond with the new sky that manage to free him from the curse...the possessive turf that he is

I know you haven’t updated in over a year. I just really hope that one day you will have to come back to this story and update! I love it so much and really want to see where it will go!

Is this still ongoing? Please tell me it is! I absolutely adore this fanfic and really want to see what you do with it and how it will turn out. Thanks for sharing this story with the Khr fandom, it’s probably my favorite fanfic on here!

Why assume the worst, Fon? Now you’ve been proved completely wrong. Take that!

She totally swooned in the arms of naked Fon... lucky girl.

oh yeah please wake up in a naked Fon arms. can't wait for you to write more

Please continue

Please update. This is amazing

Love Fon... handsome, powerful Fon.