Reviews for I'll Show You What Home Is (and then I'll ask you to stay)
TortoisetheStoryteller chapter 14 . 9/28/2019
Cuuuute! And I'm so glad to see you posting again. I really love this story.
boywholivedcometodie chapter 13 . 9/7/2019
Love this!
Emma chapter 13 . 8/24/2019
Hey! This is an absolutely delightful story. Im in love with the idea of Baze and Chirrut as dads. Cant wait to see where this goes. Thank you so much for taking the time to write it out and for sharing it with us a. Youre a lovely writer!
TortoisetheStoryteller chapter 13 . 7/4/2019
I love it!
TortoisetheStoryteller chapter 12 . 2/6/2019
I love this story! I'm not usually a fan of modern AUs, but this is great!
Caver Floyd chapter 12 . 1/15/2019
Good story. Got to admit, my favorite part is child-soldier-Jyn.

Back in the first few chapters it was mentioned the Baze and Chirrut have two cars cause sometimes they need to drive separately to work. I find it highly unlikely that Chirrut is allowed to legally drive given how blind you've depicted him as.

Is Baze and Chirrut's occupation going to play a role in the story? I would assume most fitness classes at a gym would be either evenings or weekends since that is when the standard clientele are available (not working). Which would also coincide with when Jyn and Bodhi are not at school and need an adult with them.
Nadia.156502 chapter 11 . 12/28/2018
Amazing! Thank you for this story! I think that you did a great job and little Jyn is really accurately portrayed. I just don't see Chirrut and Baze as a couple, I've always thought of their relationship as deep and true friendship but that's not the focus so.. Anyway, I hope you will keep updating because this actually is THE best Rogue One fic that I was able to find so far!
Waiting for the Chapter 12
Aqua and Luna's dead account chapter 11 . 7/16/2018
Gosh—this is a beautiful fanfic. I’m so glad you updated. The casual interactions make it so much fun to read and Anakin is 10/10 slice of life father. Can’t wait to see more of them.
~Aqua
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2018
Great story! I hope you update soon!
VanillaAshes chapter 9 . 11/3/2017
Love this story, you write in so much detail and it's amazing! I love reading things you write!
Great job!
Aqua and Luna's dead account chapter 9 . 9/10/2017
Aaah! I loved this update so much! This is such an amazing story and I can wait to see what happens next! Rogue One is such a great movie and I'm so glad you're back with an update! I loved how you wrote the characters and the ending was beautiful!
~Aqua
Aqua and Luna's dead account chapter 8 . 6/2/2017
I was so excited to see this chapter released! It's such an amazing story and I honestly thought the chapter was worth the wait! Awesome work.
~Aqua
anon chapter 7 . 5/15/2017
loved the update!
Aqua and Luna's dead account chapter 7 . 5/7/2017
This was a great chapter! It was interesting to see more of the fictional land of Star Wars incorporated into this fiction! I can't wait to see what happens next.
~Aqua
Aqua and Luna's dead account chapter 6 . 5/7/2017
This is an amazing fic to anchor my stay in the Rogue One fandom! I love how all the characters are kids and I love the portrayal of the Rogue One cast! It's simply marvelous!
~Aqua
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