Reviews for Inheritance: A New Legacy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon I love this story Please have eragon get into the action and come back to alagaisia |
![]() ![]() How about when Ismira shows him around she takes him to the tree Saphira used to live in?And where her egg appeared. Just a suggestion... |
![]() ![]() Yay! I’m so excited and thank you so much for all the effort you’ve put into this! I saw the email in my inbox and honestly I had forgotten about this but I will definitely reread it! Thanks so much! |
![]() ![]() Please for the love of God continue this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() saphira was drunk |
![]() ![]() ![]() subtle |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey,sorry I'm late in reviewing, life has been busy, but here I am! I thought this was a great chapter, I can already see ismira's reaction to what happened in the bedroom. I'm assuming it wont be a good one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() #AlwaysTrustElva |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Phineas should better learn not to trust strangers this easily, even if the woman knew his mother. Anyways, great chapter! I can feel Maylin and Phineas's relationship affecting Phineas and Ismira's... I'm waiting for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story! Im looking forward for the next chapters, you made Phineas be such an interesting main character, with his problem with his father, his confused emotions... Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol! Drunk dragon! |
![]() ![]() A lot of this contradicts what has been said in the actual books. This is really nice though, continue writing! Also, use more commas. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So that is what you told me about! |
![]() ![]() Its actually the Anora River and I just found out what the last chapter is called. This is how I feel about that: :'C that means that the most you've written so far is up to Ellesméra! :'C |