Apologies for such a lite review.

Brilliantly written chapter, funny humor moments... what more need be said? :)
Good choice of music also for the sword fight scene. ;)

Squeeee!

I’m loving the extra backstory you’re giving Flynn/Eugene. Here he seems like a good mix of Jack sparrow, Sinbad, and prince and the pauper.

I’m so happy! That was indeed an awesome chapter, I don’t know how you can write so well. I’m amazed!
Btw, what do you mean by “El bellissimo”? ‘Cause I’m Italian and there’s no such thing as “el” in my language.
I hope you will update soon as this is one of my favorite fanfictions ever and you are very talented, my friend.
See you next time!

Holy crap this is so good! I'm loving this Flynn Rider, so entertaining to read. I can't wait to see his interactions with Rapunzel, it seems like its going to be a lot of fun. Your writing style is superb, its the type of writing I can only dream of doing. Its just so...*chef's kiss*...bravo. I'd hate to see this masterpiece abandoned :(

And now Rapunzel finally enters the story...er, as an adult, that is. BTW, I did happen to note the quotation from MLP:FIM. (Or, if not, a remarkable similarity.) Glad to see you still made progress on the story, and I'm sorry I've been so busy that I haven't kept up. See you next chapter!

Your writing is so good!? Hope to see an update soon

I’m loving this story!
I thought Flynn was going to keep eating while he fought the guards. At one point the ice cream would have fallen because of one of the guards and Flynn would have gasped and said “Look at what you’ve done!” or “Now, that’s a real sin” and apologized to Norris

Sound like a really good sword fight is soon to follow.

Also, I saw what you did there with last piece of dialouge. Good thinking. :)

Keep up th good work, old friend.

Oh that cliffhanger! Love the bit of action we got to see at the end. I thought at first Flynn could end that conflict without getting into a fight, but after what the Captain said... yeah, I’d fight by his side any day. Looking forward to more!

I’m so happy you updated! Your writing is seriously amazing. I can’t wait for the fight I know it’s going to be awesome! Please update again soon!

mOrE pLeAsE

The difference in setting between Weselton and Corona is like night and day. Everything Flynn experiences makes Corona feel like paradise and a place I wish I could visit right now! ESPECIALLY The Honeycomb. The descriptions of the food there made me hungry when I was reading it, and I had to buy a box of paczki on my way home from work yesterday!

Norris seems like a really good guy despite his shady background, and it was cool to see Cassandra make an appearance too. I’m looking forward to seeing both of them in the future. Great writing as always!

This adaptation of the opening scene in tangled is amazing! Simply well put, you know exactly how to paint the most perfect pictures with you words! Great work, friend!

Thank you so much for updating this is one of the best stories I read in my life please update soon you have great skill in writing congratulations

You put my writing to shame. :)