I really liked the story so far. While I would like some light crossovers and maybe a few comic characters I don’t think you should overdo it. It would simply make the story to unfocused or big. That is something that I saw a lot happening with SI stories. But I hope you continue I like the way you focused on technology so far with limited powers.

I love it . Please update whenever you have the chance to. Thank you.

Charles Xavier should show up. It is (aside from possibly the movie version) the same universe.

I hope you don't bring Harry Potter, that'll be weird. Pls update :D

pretty good but are you ever getting back to this ?

Aw shit here we go again.

I don't like it, I don't like it at all.

He's got the devil's skill in negotiation, but can't get through a single sentence without sounding either stilted as fuck or arrogant enough to eat a bullet.

I'm done, fuck this fic.

His smart mouth shit is very annoying. Idiot forgot socks and shoes and got taken down with a dart.

As is, they've got him on a B&E, and whatever bullshit charges they want to throw at him.

But nah, fuck that tension, he'll just cheat code out and play at being a dollar store Tony Stark.

I don't know if you ever watched Agents of SHIELD, but Coulson is flat out a danger to any "enhanced" he considers a threat.

But nope, Dustbin turned into a ghost and peaced out, while saying dumb shit at Fury.

Like right now I'm hoping either Clint blows his head off or the black widow takes his head off with a razor wire garrote.

That's how much you've endeared me to Dustbin.

That is a really weird name. I thought marvel always went with bullshit white bread alliterative names, like Happy Hogan, Pepper Potts, Bucky Barnes, Bruce Banner, Peter Parker, Steven Strange, that type of shit.

You went right for left field, like Hydrangea Davenport. Eh, SI names tend to be weird.

I was a little annoyed at the high energy intro, but I liked when the system slapped his hand for going for TOTAL DOMINATION before creating his physical form.

The pace does feel a bit rushed, like some typos would have been dodged after a few read throughs, but I can see wanting to get on with it.

You were talking about your cute booty, then how you made yourself erect and I was about to stop reading when I noticed the word elbows.
Self insert, really? Now your just messing with me.

In the description it said he fell into the Marvel universe, I took it literally.
I thought it was night out and he was falling towards the earth when lets say a spotlight came on, I bet this is going to hurt I thought. The big bang was sort of a let down.

When does next chapter come?

Do next chapter it's getting interesting

please update the gamer avenger

GOSH-DARN CLIFFIE