Reviews for The Demon's Mate
1slandGrown chapter 24 . 6/20
I so wish this story was publishedin a paperback (I’m all about real books). I know the character names would have to change but I would still read this over and over again. I absolutely love this story. I just found it (Believe it or not I have not read twilight fan fiction until the announcement of Midnight Sunthis is only my second time reading it but I find myself thinking about it... I have a feeling I’ll be reading it several more times in the future. Excellent Excellent writing.
witchyred chapter 32 . 6/9
This was one of the best AU (I think that would more or less be what this is considered, right?) fics I've ever read. I took 2&1/2 days to read it all, I was obsessed. Your ideas on theology, demonology, vampirism, everything... it just had me straight up hooked. My only complaint was a minor spelling error or two that would maybe take me a second to decipher & a couple of phrases that I felt were worded oddly, but that could just be me b/c I read till I thought my eyes would fall out. I don't mean to nitpick, I'm just highlighting I was extremely hard pressed to find any actual fault w/your amazingly epic tale. Thank you SO MUCH for sharing this! I was late to find this treasure, but I'm so glad I did! Again, simply amazing!
cullenbradford chapter 22 . 5/3
Hi I love this story I was wondering where the sequel went I would love to read it. If you could help that would be amazing thank you
celajwhitney chapter 30 . 1/15
so Bella killed Edward and Jasper killed Alice? good show! now it's time for Victoria to die.
celajwhitney chapter 24 . 1/15
vindictive much ? no less than they deserve for letting a teenage boy run the coven.
bbmassey88 chapter 32 . 11/11/2019
Absolutely loved this story
silverpieces chapter 18 . 10/26/2019
Yeah, that’s really not a lot of time...
Mel chapter 32 . 10/21/2019
Is it just me or does anyone else want to see Bella's mommy dearest (aka Renee) welcome to hell? I am kinda fiending to see her comeuppance for her poor parenting skills.

I greatly enjoyed this story by the way...I may have reviewed before as this is my 3rd time reading it.
Mk chapter 1 . 9/19/2019
For chapter 17 there is almost a whole paragraph taken from Legion the movie. Idk if it was accidental or not.
cullenbradford chapter 32 . 5/12/2019
Where is the sequel to this story i love it
cullenbradford chapter 2 . 4/5/2019
I was wondering if you still have the sequel to this story (the demons mate)
SassYNoleS chapter 32 . 3/31/2019
Another Great Story !

Thanks For Sharing X
sohelpmegod chapter 32 . 3/10/2019
this was excellent! very unique and well written
Guest chapter 31 . 10/29/2018
The Battle was incredible!

Michael was a true friend and protector of Bella over the years and I'm glad he took care of Izzy as Jasper dealt the final justice of James and Victoria! Scaring Victoria as she'd scared Bella was a stroke of genus as was Bella telling her James came for her and not Victoria because he didn't really love Victoria was the final nail in Victoria's coffin!

I'm most happy she can't hurt Bella any longer!
Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 32 . 10/29/2018
You certainly rocked their real wedding night! It was nothing short of AMAZING!

I'm beyond relieved her annual visits from Victoria are over!

I'm also very happy she and Jasper found one another, finally!

It's been a pleasure to read this story nd I can find no words to say thank you other than THANK YOU!
152 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »